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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Sure, in my child period I have advice for cycling. In these activities I am learning to how to hang go with my friends in the holiday such that they can engage that with me with lots of activities.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Sure, recycling activities is very popular in my country so that we can save a lot of energy. Instead of using private cars to have a carbon reductions, let's reduce carbons by 2030 to support environments.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法和时态多有错误,表达不够清楚。回答应直接回答问题并用一到两句具体细节支持,避免冗长且保持自然。建议使用正确的过去时,改用简单明确的短句,并用连接词(例如“and”、“so”)使逻辑连贯。示例细节可以包括你骑车的年龄、和谁一起骑、在哪儿骑以及你为什么喜欢。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I spent a lot of time riding it with my friends around the neighborhood. We often rode to the park on weekends, and I liked cycling because it was fun and made me feel free.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中出现词汇和搭配错误(如“recycling”与“biking”混淆,“carbon reductions”用法不自然),内容偏政治宣传且缺少具体说明。建议先直接给出判断,然后用具体原因或例子支持(例如骑行作为通勤方式、城市自行车道增多或共享单车普及)。使用相关词汇如“cycling/biking”,“commute”,“shared bikes”,“reduce carbon emissions”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think cycling is quite popular. Many people use bikes to commute, especially in big cities where there are bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes. This helps reduce traffic and lower carbon emissions, so more people choose bikes for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Sure, in my child period I have advice for cycling.

Sure, when I was a child I had a bicycle and learned to cycle.

句子时态和用词不当。原句使用现在时("have")和不自然词组("child period"、"advice for cycling")。根据对话时态,应使用过去时描述童年("when I was a child")并使用正确词汇"bicycle"和"learned to cycle"。建议用“when I was a child”引出过去经历,动词用过去时。

Verb + -ing form

× In these activities I am learning to how to hang go with my friends in the holiday such that they can engage that with me with lots of activities.

During holidays I used to go out with my friends and take part in many cycling activities.

句子结构混乱、动词形式错误及不必要的不定式。原句包含不正确的现在进行时("I am learning to how to hang go"),并有无意义的词组("hang go"、"engage that with me")。根据描述过去习惯,应使用过去或过去习惯表达("used to" 或 过去式)。建议简化为清晰的表达:主语+过去习惯动词+活动内容。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Sure, recycling activities is very popular in my country so that we can save a lot of energy.

Sure, recycling activities are very popular in my country, so we can save a lot of energy.

主谓不一致。主语“recycling activities”为复数,谓语应使用复数形式“are”而不是“is”。另外逗号更自然地连接分句。建议检查主语是单数还是复数来决定谓语形式。

Incorrect use of infinitive/Verb form

× Instead of using private cars to have a carbon reductions, let's reduce carbons by 2030 to support environments.

Instead of using private cars to reduce carbon emissions, let's cut carbon emissions by 2030 to help the environment.

词汇搭配和形式错误:“have a carbon reductions”不正确,名词单复数和搭配错误(应为“carbon emissions”或“carbon emissions reductions”);“reduce carbons”也不自然。短语“support environments”用法不当,应为“help the environment”或“support environmental protection”。建议使用常见搭配“reduce/cut carbon emissions”和“the environment”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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