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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No I didn't. I even don't know how to learn a bike. I'm not good at biking, but I just learn it for my university to be a transportation to push me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

That's for sure. In my country the origin and the Youngs are playing bike at the playground or some guard and the park to exercise.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接、语法正确并尽量简短。注意时态和句子结构,避免中式表达。可以先一句直接回答,再用一两句解释原因和背景,使用连接词使流畅。例如把“I even don't know how to learn a bike”改为“I didn't know how to ride a bike.”并把“just learn it for my university to be a transportation to push me”改为“I only learned to ride when I went to university so I could use it to get around.”

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I didn't know how to ride a bike as a child. I only learned it when I started university because I needed a cheap and convenient way to get around campus.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法正确并提供具体细节。避免词汇错误(如“origin”“Youngs”“guard”)。可以用连接词拓展并举例说明谁在骑车、哪里骑、目的是什么。把泛泛的说法改为具体的场景和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Cycling is very popular, especially among students and older people. You can often see them riding in parks, on bike paths, or around playgrounds for exercise and short commutes.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No I didn't. I even don't know how to learn a bike.

No, I didn't. I didn't even know how to ride a bike.

句子中谈的是过去是否会骑自行车,时态应为过去时,而原句中使用了现在时"don't know"与前句的过去时不一致。且动词搭配错误,英语中应说"ride a bike"而不是"learn a bike"。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时态,使用固定搭配"ride a bike"。

Present tense issue

× I'm not good at biking, but I just learn it for my university to be a transportation to push me.

I'm not good at cycling, and I only learned it to use as transportation at university.

句子混用了现在时和过去时,且表达不自然。原句中"I'm not good"可保留为现在状况,但后半句应说明过去学车的目的,应使用过去时"learned"。"just learn it for my university to be a transportation to push me"结构错误且用词不当,改为"learned it to use as transportation at university"更地道。建议:1) 如果想表达过去学过,用过去时;2) 使用固定搭配"use as transportation/for transportation";3) 用"cycling"或"ride a bike"表示骑车。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× That's for sure. In my country the origin and the Youngs are playing bike at the playground or some guard and the park to exercise.

That's for sure. In my country, people of all ages ride bikes in playgrounds and parks to exercise.

原句有多个问题:"the origin and the Youngs" 不是正确表达,且大写错误(Youngs),应使用"people of all ages"或类似表达;动词短语应为"ride bikes"而不是"playing bike";名词复数和可数形式错误(playground/park复数或并列需并列形式);"some guard"毫无意义,可能原意是"some squares"或"gardens"。因此改为更通顺的句子。建议使用通用表达如"people of all ages"并用"ride bikes"表示骑车,注意名词单复数和大小写。

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