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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Back with my father gave me a little my birthday gift, my smart meeting, the bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think the back I think is popular popular in my country because I have the banking info feveraging other people. Go to the work by your bike. Yes, Oh, recycle.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰、语法混乱且信息零散。要直接回应问题,先用一句明确的主题句告诉考官是否有自行车,然后用1–2句补充具体细节(例如谁送的、什么时候、外观或记忆)。注意使用正确的时态和简单句式,避免冗长或不相关的词。练习时可把句子控制在3–4句内,并用连词(例如“and”, “because”, “so”)连接细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a small bike as a birthday present when I was seven. It was bright red and had training wheels, so I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. I remember feeling very proud when I could ride without help.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 32.0

Gợi ý: 回答含义模糊且表达混乱。需要先给出直接的观点(Yes/No + 简要原因),然后用1–2句具体支持理由(例如通勤、环保、经济实惠),并用连接词使逻辑清晰。避免无关或拼写错误的词,使用简单明确的词汇描述事实或举例。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use bicycles to commute because they are cheap and convenient for short distances. Also, cycling is seen as an eco-friendly option, so some cities promote bike lanes to encourage more people to ride.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Back with my father gave me a little my birthday gift, my smart meeting, the bike.

My father gave me a small bike as a birthday gift.

句子结构混乱,词序和多余词造成意思不清。原句包含冗余短语(如“Back with”,“my smart meeting”)且主语与动词位置不当。建议按英语常规句子结构:主语 + 谓语 + 宾语,并用简洁明确的名词短语表达礼物(a small bike as a birthday gift)。改正后句子为“My father gave me a small bike as a birthday gift.”(我父亲把一辆小自行车作为生日礼物送给了我)。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think the back I think is popular popular in my country because I have the banking info feveraging other people.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them to travel to work.

原句词序混乱、重复(“I think”两次、“popular popular”)、并包含无意义或拼写错误短语(如“the back”,“banking info feveraging”)。这是句子结构和词汇选择错误。应使用主语(I)+谓语(think)+宾语从句,且在从句中使用复数名词“bikes are popular”,并用清晰原因说明(because many people use them to travel to work)。建议删除无关或错误的词,使用常见表达例如“use them to travel to work/commute”。

Sentence structure errors

× Go to the work by your bike.

People go to work by bike.

原句缺少主语且冠词使用不当(“the work”应为“work”或“go to work”),并且人称不一致(原句用命令式或不完整短语)。这是句子结构和冠词/名词使用问题。建议用一般陈述句表达普遍事实:People go to work by bike/Many people commute by bike。修正为“People go to work by bike.”。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, Oh, recycle.

Yes. Also, it's environmentally friendly and helps recycling efforts.

原句不完整且含义模糊(“Oh, recycle”不能独立成句)。这是句子结构错误并且信息不明确。建议扩展为完整句子,说明骑自行车有环保好处,例如“it's environmentally friendly”或“it helps reduce waste/recycling”。如果想表达“有利于环保/循环利用”,应使用明确的词组并完成句子。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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