Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases like "my first bike of all" and unclear expressions such as "make a ride."

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike and I rode it every day to visit friends and play in the park. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I felt confident riding it around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Clarify reasons with correct vocabulary and logical linking. Begin with a direct answer, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid incorrect phrases like "cheap to bike" or "like plastic on the road."

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to work or shopping, and they are easy to park and maintain in crowded cities.

× When I was a child I used to have a bike and it was a my first bike of all and I used to use it to make a ride or hanging out with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike; it was my first bike, and I used it to go for rides or hang out with my friends.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before 'my first bike' and awkward verb phrases. The phrase 'it was a my first bike' incorrectly combines an indefinite article with a possessive adjective; remove 'a'. 'I used to use it to make a ride' is incorrect collocation and structure: use 'go for rides' or 'ride it'. Also parallel structure requires either 'to go for rides or to hang out' or use base forms 'go for rides or hang out' after 'used it to'. Suggestions: remove the extra article, use natural collocations ('go for rides', 'hang out'), and add commas to separate clauses.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country. This is because bikes are so cheap to bike and it's so convenient for people to hang out and like plastic on the road.

✓ Yes, I do think bicycles are popular in my country. This is because bicycles are inexpensive and convenient for people to use for getting around or hanging out; however, plastic waste on the roads is a separate problem.

Problems: 'cheap to bike' is incorrect phrase and 'bike' used as verb/noun wrong here; better to say 'inexpensive' or 'cheap' and 'convenient to use for getting around'. The clause 'like plastic on the road' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely intended to mention plastic waste on roads. Also prefer 'bicycles' as the noun in formal speech. Suggestions: replace 'bike' verb misuse with 'use' or 'get around by bicycle', clarify 'plastic on the road' as 'plastic waste on the roads', and restructure sentence for clarity and correct tense.