Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense) and give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove fillers. For example, say when you received the bike, who gave it to you, and one concrete memory of using it.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child — my grandparents gave it to me as a birthday present. I used it every day to visit friends and explore the neighborhood, and I remember once riding with my best friend to a park where we spent the afternoon playing.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent and specific. Begin with a clear opinion, then give 2–3 concrete reasons and a linking phrase. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "beneficial for the environment") and avoid hesitation. Mention examples such as school commutes, low cost, and environmental benefits.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them to school because they are cheap and convenient, and adults often use them for short commutes. Moreover, cycling is good for the environment as it reduces traffic and air pollution.

× Yes I have a buy when I would try it is my gift my grandparents give me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was a gift my grandparents gave me.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect and mixed tenses. 'I have a buy' should be 'I had a bike' (past tense and correct noun). 'When I would try it' is ungrammatical here; use 'when I was a child' or omit. 'My grandparents give me' should be past tense 'my grandparents gave me'. Use clear subject-verb agreement and consistent past tense for past events. Suggestion: use simple past for childhood facts: 'I had a bike when I was a child; it was a gift my grandparents gave me.'

× No I really love is I am usually you wait to catching up with my friend and uh is this my umm memorable memories?

✓ I really loved it; I usually used it to meet up with my friends, and it is one of my memorable memories.

Sentence has multiple structure and tense problems. 'No' is confusing here; replace with affirmation. 'I really love is' is ungrammatical; use 'I really loved it' (past). 'I am usually you wait to catching up with my friend' mixes pronouns and verb forms; correct to 'I usually used it to meet up with my friends.' 'Is this my umm memorable memories?' is unclear; use 'it is one of my memorable memories.' Suggestion: break into two clear sentences, keep past tense for childhood experiences, correct pronouns and verb forms.

× Yes, it's easy to see a lot of children use by as a vehicle to go to school.

✓ Yes, it's easy to see a lot of children using bikes as a way to go to school.

Verb form and noun errors: 'use by' is wrong order and 'by' should be 'bike' or 'bikes'. Use the gerund 'using' after 'see' for ongoing observation: 'see children using bikes'. 'Vehicle' is acceptable but 'way' or 'method' is more natural here. Keep present simple for general truth.

× I think it's really convenient and umm have umm, the McAfee, uh, it's also, uh, have broader environment.

✓ I think it's really convenient, and it also contributes to a cleaner environment.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'have umm, the McAfee' is unintelligible and likely mis-said. 'It's also, uh, have broader environment' misuses 'have' with 'it' and 'broader environment' is awkward. Use 'it also contributes to a cleaner environment' to convey the idea that bikes are environmentally friendly. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear vocabulary.