Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные времена и стройте предложение ясно: начните с прямого ответа, затем дайте 1–2 конкретных подробности. Избегайте повторов и незаконченных фраз. Также следите за артиклями и формой глаголов (например, past simple для воспоминаний).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright pink bicycle with a small basket on the front, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо и стройно: используйте подходящую лексику (например, "mode of transport"), избегайте заполнителей (uh, umm) и согласуйте слова (singular/plural, артикли). Добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения со связкой (because, so, for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country as a mode of transport because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to run errands in crowded city centers.

× Of course, I have a bike when I was a child, It's a a really beautiful, it was a really beautiful pink bike and I.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a really beautiful pink bike.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'; use past tense 'had'. Also sentence fragments and repetition ('It's a a really beautiful, it was a really beautiful') create redundancy and confusion; split into two sentences and keep past tense consistently. Suggestion: use 'I had' and 'It was' for past descriptions and avoid repeating the same adjective.

× Yes, of course, it's the most popular, umm, instruments to move into the our city because it's, uh, comfortable, it's cheap and, uh, it's uh, modern.

✓ Yes, of course, they are the most popular means of getting around in our city because they're comfortable, cheap, and modern.

The original uses 'it's' (singular) to refer to plural 'bikes' and incorrectly calls bikes 'instruments' and uses 'to move into the our city'. Correct pronoun agreement: use 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Replace 'instruments to move' with 'means of getting around' and remove the extra article 'the' before 'our city'. Use contractions consistently or fully spelled forms. Suggestion: ensure pronoun and verb agree in number, choose accurate vocabulary ('means' instead of 'instruments'), and remove extra articles.