Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct word order and remove repetitions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood in the afternoons, which was both fun and good exercise.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and then add a specific supporting detail or example using a linking phrase. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "affordable" or "common") to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are more affordable than cars. For example, many people cycle for short commutes in cities to save money and avoid traffic.

× I used to ride around around it neighbor my neighborhood in my free time which both fun and good exercise.

✓ I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood in my free time, which was both fun and good exercise.

This sentence has multiple problems: repeated word 'around', incorrect word order 'it neighbor my neighborhood', missing verb 'was' in the relative clause, and unclear reference. These are sentence structure errors (Type 26). To improve, remove the duplicate word, place 'my bike' next to the verb 'ride', reorder to 'around my neighborhood', and add the past-tense verb 'was' in the clause 'which was both fun and good exercise' to make the clause grammatical and consistent with the past-time context.

× Yes, more people in my country use bikes because bikes are less expensive than cars and other vehicles.

✓ Yes, many more people in my country use bikes because they are less expensive than cars and other vehicles.

The original sentence is understandable but can be improved for naturalness and pronoun use. This involves present-tense usage and pronoun clarity (Type 6 and Type 12). Replace 'more people' with 'many more people' for fluency and use the pronoun 'they' to avoid repeating 'bikes'. Keeping present tense is correct because the question asks about current popularity. Suggested improvement: 'Yes, many more people in my country use bikes because they are less expensive than cars and other vehicles.'