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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I usually borrowed it from my friends or relatives whenever I needed.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country and every second person in my country is having his or her own bike and this caused a very vast and huge traffic problem also.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating negatives ("No, I did not") and reduce redundancy ("friends or relatives" then "whenever I needed"). Add one brief specific detail (e.g., how often or for what). Use a linking phrase to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I didn't own a bike as a child, but I often borrowed one from a neighbour to ride to school at weekends. For example, I borrowed my cousin’s bike every Saturday to practice riding in the park, which helped me learn quickly.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question but is wordy and contains awkward phrasing and exaggeration. Use concise, natural expressions and avoid absolute/unclear statistics like "every second person." Provide a specific reason or example and use a linking word to show cause (e.g., "because" or "which"). Correct grammar ("has" instead of "is having") and tone down hyperbole.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting. For instance, in my city most households own at least one motorcycle, which contributes to congestion on main roads during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

'6:Present tense issue'

× 'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I usually borrowed it from my friends or relatives whenever I needed.'

'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I usually borrowed one from my friends or relatives whenever I needed it.'

'Issue: Pronoun and noun repetition with present-tense form. The phrase "borrowed it" is acceptable, but repeating "a bike" is wordy; use the pronoun "one" to refer back to "bike" or keep "it" with a clear referent. Also ensure tense consistency: "did not have" (past) and "usually borrowed" (past habitual) are correct. Suggestion: use "one" to avoid repetition or "it" with "needed it" for clarity.'},{

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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