Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike and at that time I always recycled my bike with my grandmother to, uh, walk around in the streets.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Definitely, because uh using bike to commute is more cost effective. Moreover, uh recipe recycling bikes always can uh, strengthen your muscle and improve your fitness levels, which is helpful for public health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并减少停顿和重复用词;注意词汇准确(例如不要用“recycled”表达骑车),并补充一两句具体细节以丰富内容。可以用一到两句描述骑车的频率、感受或目的,并用连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike with my grandmother around our neighborhood every afternoon. It was a simple way for us to spend time together and I remember enjoying the fresh air and feeling independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要避免语法和用词错误(如“recipe recycling”不合适),句子应更简洁并给出具体原因或例子。使用连接词(for example, moreover, therefore)来组织观点;注意时态和词汇搭配(ride/repair instead of recycle)。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Many people ride bikes for short trips because it is cheaper than driving and easier than waiting for buses. For example, commuters often cycle to work to save money and stay fit, which also reduces traffic and pollution.
× Yes, I had a bike and at that time I always recycled my bike with my grandmother to, uh, walk around in the streets.
✓ Yes, I had a bike and at that time I always rode my bike with my grandmother to walk around the streets.
句子使用过去时(had 表示过去)应保持动词一致性。原句中使用“recycled”不符合语境,意思为“回收”,而且和“walk around”搭配不当,正确应使用表示骑车的动词“rode”。建议:当描述过去习惯或经常发生的动作时,用过去时(如 rode);使用与语境匹配的词汇(ride 的过去式是 rode)。
× Definitely, because uh using bike to commute is more cost effective.
✓ Definitely, because using a bike to commute is more cost-effective.
缺少冠词并且形容词短语拼写与连字符问题。这里“bike”前需要不定冠词“a”;“cost effective”作为复合形容词修饰前面的短语时通常写作“cost-effective”。建议:注意可数名词前加冠词,并使用正确的复合形容词形式。
× Moreover, uh recipe recycling bikes always can uh, strengthen your muscle and improve your fitness levels, which is helpful for public health.
✓ Moreover, regularly recycling bikes can strengthen your muscles and improve your fitness levels, which is helpful for public health.
原句中“recipe”明显为错误词汇,应为“regular”或“proper”;“recycling bikes”语义仍不通(回收自行车与增强肌肉无关),推测想表达“经常骑行(regularly riding)”或“regular cycling”。另外“muscle”应使用复数“muscles”。还要调整副词位置:将副词放在动词前或句首更自然。建议:用与语境一致的词(如 regularly riding/regular cycling),并注意名词单复数匹配。