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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bag. When I was a kid, umm, I remember my father borrowed my cousin's bike to teach me how to ride, but I found it very hard for me, uh, because I can't keep my balance all the time, so I always felt down.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course, you can see at the share bike everywhere in China, you just gain the code and you can take a ride, umm and half hour just take uh, 1.5 yuan is so in efficient and uh real bargain.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 首先,回答要直接且时态正确;避免与问题无关的词(如“bag”),并减少填充词(umm, uh)。结构上应先给出直接回答,然后用一两句具体细节支持,注意动词时态一致(过去时)。可以用更自然的表达描述学习骑车的经历,并加入连接词使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. My father borrowed my cousin's bike to teach me, but I found it difficult to balance and kept falling. After a few lessons I improved a little, but I didn't become confident enough to ride on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要先给出总体立场,然后用具体例子和连词支持观点。减少语气词并注意发音或词形使用(例如 “scan the code” 或 “unlock the bike” 而非 “gain the code”),以及形容词用法(“inexpensive”而非“in efficient”)。可以提到使用方便、价格低、覆盖范围广等具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. Shared bikes are everywhere and you can unlock one by scanning a QR code, which is very convenient. They are also cheap — for example, a thirty-minute ride often costs only about 1.5 yuan, so many people use them for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't have a bag.

No, I didn't have one.

学生在回答关于过去("when you were a child")的问题时用的是现在时的否定句 “I don't have a bag”,且代词不明确(bag 与前文无关)。应使用过去时并用不定代词 one 指代前文提到的物品。建议:遇到过去的经历问题时,把动词改为过去时,并使用合适的代词。

5: Past tense issue

× When I was a kid, umm, I remember my father borrowed my cousin's bike to teach me how to ride, but I found it very hard for me, uh, because I can't keep my balance all the time, so I always felt down.

When I was a kid, I remember my father borrowing my cousin's bike to teach me how to ride, but I found it very hard because I couldn't keep my balance, so I often fell down.

句子中多处时态和动词形式不一致: - “borrowed” 与动词 remember 搭配时应使用动名词形式 borrowing(Grammar type 8 与 5 关联,但按列表仅修正过去时问题),原句在过去叙述中混入现在时“can't”和不自然的表达“always felt down”。 - 将 “can't” 改为过去时否定“couldn't”;将 “always felt down” 改为更自然的过去习惯表达 “often fell down”。 建议:回忆过去事情时保持过去时一致;在动词 remember 后若想表达“记得做某事”,用动名词(remember doing);描述习惯性过去动作用 often / usually + 过去式。

6: Present tense issue

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Student: Of course, you can see at the share bike everywhere in China, you just gain the code and you can take a ride, umm and half hour just take uh, 1.5 yuan is so in efficient and uh real bargain.

Of course. You can see shared bikes everywhere in China. You just scan the code and you can take a ride. Half an hour costs 1.5 yuan, which is very economical and a real bargain.

原句存在现在时使用与词汇搭配问题: - “share bike” 应为形容词 + 名词顺序的复合名词 “shared bikes”。 - “see at the share bike everywhere” 语序错误,应为 “see shared bikes everywhere”。 - “gain the code” 用词错误,应为 “scan the code” 或 “enter the code”。 - 关于费用表达,用现在时说明常态是可以的,但原句“half hour just take uh, 1.5 yuan is so in efficient and uh real bargain” 语序混乱且 “in efficient” 错用,应为 “economical” 或 “efficient” 但常用 “economical”。 建议:描述常态事实可用一般现在时,注意名词短语顺序与固定搭配(e.g., shared bikes, scan the code, costs 1.5 yuan)。

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