Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I never had a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Sure, we have popular brand of the bike, bike Giant.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在主题句后补充具体细节(例如原因、感受或与他人的对比),并使用连接词使叙述更自然。例如可以说明为什么没有自行车,是由家庭经济、居住环境还是安全原因,以及你当时是否希望有一辆。保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I never had a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked or took the bus to school. I remember feeling a bit envious when my classmates rode together, and I wished I could join them. Later, I learned to ride a bike in my teens and enjoyed it a lot.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且语法不够准确,信息也不够具体。建议先给出明确的主题句,然后提供具体证据或例子(例如流行原因、使用场景、城市骑行文化或著名品牌),并使用连接词(such as, because, for example)使句子更连贯。注意语法和词序。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting in cities, and brands like Giant are well-known and widely available. In addition, there has been a rise in cycling events and bike lanes, which has encouraged more people to ride.
× Sure, we have popular brand of the bike, bike Giant.
✓ Sure, we have a popular brand of bike: Giant.
原句中“popular brand”缺少冠词且名词单复数搭配不当。正确表达应为“a popular brand of bike”或“The popular bike brand Giant”,在此用冒号或逗号前后结构更清晰。建议在可数名词单数前加不定冠词“a”,并将“bike”作为单数形式或使用复数“bikes”视语境。