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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Bike in China is very popular in most most family and my friends everyone had a bike when we were a kid.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短且有重复语音填充(“I I”),需要更自然、完整并提供一到两句补充信息。可以在开头给出肯定句作为主题句,然后用一两句细节说明,比如什么时候有、是谁买的、常去哪儿骑等。注意避免重复和语音停顿,控制在不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven — my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I used to ride it to the park near our home almost every day, which helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点但存在语法和重复错误,句子不够连贯且细节不足。建议先用一两句清晰的主题句回答,然后用具体细节支持(例如在哪些城市更流行、用途如通勤或休闲、是否有共享单车的影响)。使用连词(such as, because, for example)使句子更连贯,避免重复词汇并注意单复数和时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. For example, many people use them for short commutes in cities, and the rise of bike-sharing services has made cycling even more common among students and office workers.

Ngữ pháp

Repetition / Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I I did.

Yes, I did.

句子中出现了“我”重复(“I I”),属于句子结构/输入错误。改为单个“I”即可。建议说话时注意停顿,避免重复词。

Singular and plural issue

× Bike in China is very popular in most most family and my friends everyone had a bike when we were a kid.

Bicycles are very popular in most families in China, and all my friends had a bike when we were kids.

问题1:单复数错误。“Bike”作为泛指应使用复数“Bicycles”,且“family”表示多数家庭时应为复数“families”。问题2:重复词“most most”。问题3:词序和连词使用混乱,导致句子结构不清楚;“my friends everyone”应调整为“all my friends”。问题4:时间表达一致性,句尾“when we were a kid”中“we”指复数,应使用复数“kids”。建议:注意主语和名词的一致性(单数/复数),避免重复词,分成两个并列分句并用逗号或连词连接以保持清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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