Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence addressing the question (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”). Avoid word mistakes (bike vs bag) and hesitations. Keep the answer concise (2–3 sentences) and add one specific detail about how you got to ride (who lent you bikes, how often, a memorable activity). Use a linking phrase such as “so” or “therefore” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually borrowed bikes from my neighbors on weekends and rode with friends in the park.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, well-structured response: begin with a direct opinion sentence (e.g., “Yes, they are very popular.”), then give two specific reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words (for example “because” and “for instance”). Avoid incorrect word choices (migrant, bags) and unclear phrases. Mention concrete examples or statistics if possible, and keep to 2–4 sentences without repeating ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, they are very popular in my country because many people find bikes more affordable and practical than cars. For example, urban commuters often cycle to avoid traffic and save money on fuel and parking.

× No, I didn't have a bag when I was uh.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student said 'bag' instead of 'bike', which is a vocabulary error and creates an incorrect meaning given the question about a bike. Also the sentence fragment 'when I was uh' is incomplete. Replace 'bag' with 'bike' to match the question and complete the clause with 'a child' for clarity. Suggestion: listen to the question and use the same key noun ('bike') and finish the time clause ('when I was a child').

× My family could not offer one at the time, so I usually played with my friends in the park or borrowed bikes from neighbors.

✓ My family could not afford one at the time, so I usually played with my friends in the park or borrowed bikes from my neighbors.

The phrase 'could not offer one' is incorrect collocation; 'could not afford one' correctly expresses lacking money. Also add the possessive 'my' before 'neighbors' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations (afford) and include possessive determiners when referring to specific people (my neighbors).

× Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in migrant because cars and or vehicles are quite expensive and so many people prefer bags as more convenient and affordable.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country because cars and other vehicles are quite expensive, so many people prefer bikes as they are more convenient and affordable.

Multiple issues: 'in migrant' is incorrect; it should be 'in my country' (wrong word choice/phrase). 'Cars and or vehicles' is awkward; use 'cars and other vehicles'. 'Prefer bags' is wrong word choice and number — should be 'prefer bikes'. Also add 'they are' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('my country'), avoid 'and/or', and ensure consistent vocabulary ('bikes').

× Some suppose for example and computers often choose bags to avoid traffic and stay on fuel. I meant.

✓ For example, some people often choose bikes to avoid traffic and save fuel.

This sentence contains multiple structure and vocabulary errors: 'Some suppose' is incorrect; use 'some people'. 'And computers' is nonsensical here. 'Choose bags' should be 'choose bikes'. 'Stay on fuel' is wrong; use 'save fuel'. The trailing 'I meant.' is unnecessary and should be removed. Suggestion: simplify the sentence: 'For example, some people often choose bikes to avoid traffic and save fuel.'