Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on grammatical accuracy, sentence structure, and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then provide 1–2 supporting details with correct verb forms and articles. Use linking words (e.g., however, later) to make the sequence clear. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was very young. However, my father bought me a bicycle when I was in grade six, and I used it to ride the short distance to school. Later, when I grew older, I saved money and bought my own bike.

Gợi ý: Improve subject-verb agreement, use clearer reasons and more precise vocabulary, and avoid vague or informal phrases. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give 2 specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, also). Keep sentences concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. This is mainly because they are much cheaper than cars, so many people use them for everyday transport. Also, young people often prefer bikes because they are seen as stylish and convenient for short trips.

× No, I didn't have a any bike when I was child born.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike when I was born.

The sentence uses both 'a' and 'any' together which is incorrect; choose 'any' with negatives. Also 'when I was child born' is wrong word order; correct phrase is 'when I was born' or 'when I was a child'. Use 'born' with 'when I was born' or 'a child' without 'born'. Suggestion: Use 'No, I didn't have any bike when I was born.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× I used to ride a bicycle which was bought by my father when I was in grade 6.

✓ I used to ride a bicycle that my father bought when I was in grade 6.

The relative clause 'which was bought by my father' is grammatically correct but wordy; using the active voice 'that my father bought' is more natural. Also 'in grade 6' is acceptable but 'when I was in grade 6' is fine. Suggestion: prefer active voice for clarity and naturalness.

× I travelled a short distances go to the school with the use of that bicycle.

✓ I travelled short distances to get to school using that bicycle.

Errors: 'a short distances' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'short distances' or 'a short distance'. 'go to the school' is wrong preposition and article use; say 'to get to school' or 'to school'. 'with the use of that bicycle' is awkward; use 'using that bicycle'. Suggestion: 'I travelled short distances to get to school using that bicycle.'

× But I later got to buy buy the bike myself when I got into.

✓ But later I bought the bike myself when I was older.

This sentence has repetition ('buy buy') and unfinished clause 'when I got into' which lacks an object (e.g., 'when I got into college' or 'when I got older'). Also 'got to buy' is awkward; simple past 'bought' fits the narrative. Suggestion: specify what you 'got into' or use 'when I was older.'

× Yes, in my country bike are more popular compared to the car or other vehicles.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are more popular than cars or other vehicles.

Subject 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to agree with verb and context. Use 'are' with plural. Also 'compared to the car' is unnatural; use 'than cars' for comparison. Suggestion: 'bikes are more popular than cars.'

× It might be because the bikes are more affordable compared to other vehicles and most of the people are in teenage and adulthood and they like to show off their bike and ride with their girlfriends in my country.

✓ This might be because bikes are more affordable than other vehicles, and many people are teenagers or young adults who like to show off their bikes and ride with their girlfriends in my country.

Multiple issues: 'the bikes' should be 'bikes' (no definite article for general statement). 'compared to' should be 'than' in comparisons. 'most of the people are in teenage and adulthood' is incorrect: use 'many people are teenagers or young adults'. 'show off their bike' should be 'their bikes' for plural possessive. Sentence was run-on; split ideas and use commas for clarity. Suggestion: simplify and use correct nouns and plurality: 'many people are teenagers or young adults who like to show off their bikes.'