Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Uh, city such as Tokyo or Kyoto, people often use bike, motor car.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 質問のリピートは自然な解答ではなく、質問に直接答える必要があります。また文法(冠詞や時制)と簡潔さを改善してください。例えばトピック文で「はい/いいえ」を述べ、その後に短い補足を1〜2文で加えると良いです。具体的には“Yes, I did.”や“No, I didn’t.”のように始め、必要なら年齢や頻度、思い出などを付け足します。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every day after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答は主張を示していますが、文法や語順、語彙選択が不自然です。“Uh”などのフィラーは控え、リンクワードで理由や具体例を付けると効果的です。例えば「Yes, I think so.」で始め、次に「because」や「for example」を用いて都市名や使用状況を具体的に説明してください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. For example, in cities like Tokyo and Kyoto many people use bicycles for short trips because they are convenient and easy to park.
× Did you have a bike when you were child?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article ('a', 'an', or 'the'). The correct phrase is 'a child'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles with singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a child', 'the child').
× Yes, I think so. Uh, city such as Tokyo or Kyoto, people often use bike, motor car.
✓ Yes, I think so. In cities such as Tokyo or Kyoto, people often use bikes and motor cars.
Multiple issues fall under preposition and sentence structure categories. 'City such as' needs the plural 'cities' and the preposition 'in' to indicate location. 'Use bike' should be 'use bikes' (plural for general statement). Items in a list should be joined with 'and' and 'motor car' should be plural as 'motor cars' or more commonly 'cars' or 'motor vehicles'. Suggestion: use 'In cities such as...' to specify location, use plural nouns for general habits ('bikes', 'cars'), and join items with 'and' for clarity.