Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child, my dad bought me a bike. I remember it, the color is red and I really enjoyed to ride the bike to the park and also it is really interesting.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
That definitely in recent years the government published the new bike and you can see it all over the metro station and when people came out, they can rent the bike, rent a new bike and take a take EU bike, go home and that is very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 答题要更直接并且语法更准确。开头用主题句直接回答问题,然后用一到两句具体细节支持(比如什么时候、在哪里、和谁一起、为什么喜欢)。注意时态一致(过去式),避免冗长或不自然的短语,并改进句子连贯性。举例说明:把“I really enjoyed to ride”改为“I really enjoyed riding”。
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small red bike that my father bought me when I was about eight. I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends on weekends, and I loved the feeling of freedom and speed. Because the bike was light and easy to handle, I quickly learned tricks like riding with no hands.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更条理清晰并使用准确词汇描述现象。先给出直接观点,然后用一至两条具体原因支撑(如共享单车普及、政府支持、交通便利)。注意动词时态和名词搭配(例如“the government introduced a bike-sharing scheme”比“published the new bike”更自然)。避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular now. In recent years the government introduced large bike-sharing schemes, so you can rent a bike at many metro stations. This system makes short trips more convenient and reduces traffic congestion, which is why many people prefer cycling for short journeys.
× Yes, when I was a child, my dad bought me a bike. I remember it, the color is red and I really enjoyed to ride the bike to the park and also it is really interesting.
✓ Yes. When I was a child, my dad bought me a bike. I remember it — the color was red, and I really enjoyed riding the bike to the park. It was also very interesting.
问题类型:过去时态与动词形式错误。说明:句子中讲的是过去发生的事情,时态应统一使用过去时。具体错误有:1) “the color is red”应与过去时一致改为“the color was red”;2) “I really enjoyed to ride”是不正确的动词搭配,在表示享受某动作时应使用动名词,改为“enjoyed riding”;3) 句尾“it is really interesting”描述过去经历也应使用过去时“it was really interesting”。建议:叙述过去经历时把句子中所有描述改为过去时;把动词“enjoy”后接动名词形式(enjoy + -ing)。
× That definitely in recent years the government published the new bike and you can see it all over the metro station and when people came out, they can rent the bike, rent a new bike and take a take EU bike, go home and that is very convenient.
✓ Yes. In recent years the government has introduced a new bike-sharing scheme, and you can see bikes at many metro stations. When people come out, they can rent a bike, take it home, and it is very convenient.
问题类型:句子结构错误(以及时态和词汇搭配问题)。说明:原句结构混乱,时态不一致且有多余或错误短语:1) “That definitely in recent years”语序错误且缺主语,改为“In recent years the government has introduced...”使用现在完成时表明从过去到现在的变化;2) “published the new bike”用词不当,政府通常“introduce”或“launch”共享单车项目,而不是“publish”;3) “you can see it all over the metro station”中代词和介词使用不当,应为“bikes at many metro stations”;4) “when people came out, they can rent”时态混用,保持一般现在时“when people come out, they can rent”;5) 重复并错误的短语“rent a new bike and take a take EU bike”语义不清,合并为“rent a bike, take it home”。建议:把长句拆成几句,保持时态一致,选择合适动词(introduce/launch/rent/take),并检查代词与名词的一致性。