Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence cohesion. Begin with a clear topic sentence, fix verb forms and articles, and avoid fragments. Add a linking word or two and one specific detail to enrich the answer. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my father gave me as a present when I was seven, and I often rode it to visit my grandfather who lived near our house. Because it let me go out by myself, it made me feel independent. I remember practicing balancing on the lane behind our home every afternoon.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar, use plural forms and clearer linking phrases. Start with a direct statement, then give a specific reason or example and use linking words (for example, during, especially) to make it coherent. Provide one concrete example to support your claim.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially when I was younger. For example, kids and even adults would race along the village lanes on weekends, and families often went cycling together for short trips to nearby parks.

× Had a small red bicycle that my father gave me as a presence when I was 7.

✓ I had a small red bicycle that my father gave me as a present when I was seven.

This sentence lacks a subject and uses the wrong noun 'presence' instead of 'present'. Add the subject 'I' to form a complete sentence and replace 'presence' with 'present' which correctly means a gift. Also write numbers under ten as words ('seven') in formal writing.

× I love that bicycle because it made me feel independent and I remember.

✓ I loved that bicycle because it made me feel independent and I remember it fondly.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I love' with past 'made me feel'. Because the context is childhood memories, use past tense 'loved' to maintain consistent time reference. Also add 'it fondly' to complete the idea after 'remember'.

× Yes, bicycle are popular in our country, especially during my younger days.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in our country, especially during my younger days.

The singular noun 'bicycle' does not agree with the plural verb 'are'. Use the plural noun 'bicycles' to match 'are'.

× All of the kids racing on the lane whether friends, families.

✓ All of the kids raced in the lane, whether they were friends or family members.

This fragment lacks a finite verb and proper connectors. Use past tense 'raced' to match 'during my younger days' and add a clause 'whether they were friends or family members' to clarify the contrast. 'Families' is inappropriate for individuals; 'family members' is clearer.