Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I I had AI had a white bicycle when I was a child and I and I ride it too and I ride it to school every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, because the the traffic here is very heavy and if riding bike on the road is a little bit diff difficult.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Improve fluency and accuracy by avoiding repetitions and tense errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Pay attention to past tense consistency and pronunciation. Keep the answer natural and under five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a white bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it to school every day. Because my school was nearby, cycling was a quick and enjoyable way to get there, and I often rode with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Give a fuller, balanced response with clear reasons and linking words. Avoid simple one-word answers; start with a direct opinion, then explain with specific reasons and, if possible, a brief contrast or prediction. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'difficult' not 'diff') and correct sentence structure.
Ví dụ: Not really. Bikes are less popular in my city because traffic is very heavy, so cycling on the roads can be dangerous. However, in some towns with quieter streets or bike lanes, more people still choose bicycles for short trips.
× Yes, I did. I I had AI had a white bicycle when I was a child and I and I ride it too and I ride it to school every day.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a white bicycle when I was a child and I rode it to school every day.
Problems: repeated words ('I I', 'and I and I') and 'AI' is likely a typo. Tense errors: 'ride' is present tense but the context is past. According to the past tense requirement of the question 'Did you have...', use simple past: 'rode'. Remove repetitions and typos. Suggestion: say 'I had a white bicycle when I was a child and I rode it to school every day.'
× No, because the the traffic here is very heavy and if riding bike on the road is a little bit diff difficult.
✓ No, because the traffic here is very heavy and riding a bike on the road is a little bit difficult.
Errors: doubled word 'the the' and 'diff' typo. Incorrect/missing article before 'bike' — use 'a bike'. The phrase 'if riding bike on the road is...' is awkward; remove 'if' to make a clear statement. Suggestion: 'No, because the traffic here is very heavy and riding a bike on the road is a little bit difficult.'