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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No I don't have bike when I child because I scared of ride bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I thought it's broken in the country umm, because budgets uh, even for many people, umm, it's a very. Call Julie Uncle, 84 hours.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense for childhood, include a topic sentence, and a linking word if you add a reason. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of falling. However, I enjoyed walking to school and sometimes rode my friend’s bike when an adult was with me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, using present tense for general facts. State your opinion, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance, and therefore). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and useful for short trips. For example, many students and market vendors use bicycles to commute and save money on transport.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of tense and subject-verb agreement

× No I don't have bike when I child because I scared of ride bike.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding a bike.

This sentence has several tense and agreement errors: 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match 'when I was a child'; 'I child' needs 'I was a child' (verb 'was' required - there is a 'There be issue' and subject-complement structure but mainly past tense); 'scared of ride bike' should be 'was afraid of riding a bike' using correct adjective + preposition and gerund after 'of'. Also add the article 'a' before 'bike'. Suggestion: use past simple consistently for past events, include appropriate auxiliary 'was' and use 'afraid of' + gerund, and include articles where needed.

Sentence structure errors and tense consistency

× Yes, I thought it's broken in the country umm, because budgets uh, even for many people, umm, it's a very. Call Julie Uncle, 84 hours.

Yes, I think bikes are popular in the country, but because of low budgets, many people cannot afford them.

The original contains mixed tenses and broken structure. 'I thought it's broken in the country' mixes past 'thought' with present 'it's' and unclear meaning; use present 'I think' for opinion. 'because budgets... even for many people' is an incorrect noun phrase and missing preposition: use 'because of low budgets' or 'because many people have low budgets'. 'it's a very. Call Julie Uncle, 84 hours.' is unintelligible and must be omitted or replaced with a clear clause. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present for general opinions), use 'because of' for reasons, and express affordability clearly ('cannot afford them').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BrokenSmashed; Fractured; Inoperative; Flouted; Defeated
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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