Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Absolutely not because my mother is too proactive and she didn't allowed me to ride a bike because she was worried about my safety. As a result I didn't have a bike until I was older.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Certainly it's very popular in my country because it's very convenient to ride a bike and it's good for the environment and also it can avoid traffic jams.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 表达需要更自然、语法更准确,避免冗长重复。注意时态和动词形式(例如 didn't allow),把观点放在句首作为主题句并用简短的补充说明。可以用一到两句具体细节说明原因或后果,使用连词提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My mother was very protective and didn’t allow me to ride because she was worried I might get hurt, so I only got one when I was older.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但略显重复。可以先给出直接简短的主题句,然后用1–2个具体原因并加上例子或比较,使用连接词使结构更紧凑。注意主谓一致(bikes are popular)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are convenient for short trips and help reduce traffic and pollution; for example, many people cycle to work in the city center to avoid long commutes by car.
× Absolutely not because my mother is too proactive and she didn't allowed me to ride a bike because she was worried about my safety.
✓ Absolutely not because my mother was too protective and she didn't allow me to ride a bike because she was worried about my safety.
错误类型:第三人称单数/动词形式错误(第三人称过去式/助动词+动词) 说明:原句中使用了 “didn't allowed”,这是错误的助动词加实义动词的形式。助动词 did(表示过去时)后面应接动词原形,因此应改为 “didn't allow”。另外,原句中用词 “proactive” 不太符合语境,通常应为 “protective”(保护性的/过分保护)。建议将 "proactive" 改为 "protective"。改正后句子时态与提问(过去)一致。建议:记住助动词 do/does/did 后面用动词原形;注意词义选择。
× Certainly it's very popular in my country because it's very convenient to ride a bike and it's good for the environment and also it can avoid traffic jams.
✓ Certainly, they are very popular in my country because it's very convenient to ride a bike, they're good for the environment, and they can also help avoid traffic jams.
错误类型:单复数问题 说明:句子主语原为复数含义(bikes),但后文用单数代词或单数谓语不一致。原句开头用 "it's very popular"(它/它是)与复数 "bikes" 不匹配。应使用复数形式 "they are (they're) very popular"。此外,为保持一致性,后面相关指代也应使用复数代词(they/they're),并注意插入逗号和连词使句子更通顺。建议:当谈论复数名词(bikes)时,主谓和代词应保持复数一致。