Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I think I'm good at sports so it is easy to me to learn the back and then I got back by myself.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I think bikes are not more unpopular in my country. I'm come from China. In China recent years we usually use.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和表达不够自然,时态和词汇使用有误。回答应开门见山然后用一两句支持细节,使用正确短语(例如 “learn to ride a bike” 和 “ride it by myself”)。注意连贯性与语法:用连词连接想法并保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I was quite sporty, so I learned to ride a bike quickly and soon I could ride it by myself without any help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达含糊且语法错误较多,逻辑不清。应先直接回答(Yes/No),然后用一两句具体理由或例子支持你的观点,使用连接词使句子连贯。注意使用正确时态与短语(例如 “in recent years” 和 “we usually use cars or public transport”)。
Ví dụ: Not really. In recent years, bicycles have become less common in many Chinese cities because more people use cars and public transport, although cycling is still popular in some smaller towns.
× Yes I did. I think I'm good at sports so it is easy to me to learn the back and then I got back by myself.
✓ Yes, I did. I think I'm good at sports, so it was easy for me to learn how to ride backwards (or do a back wheel/ride a wheelie), and then I rode backward by myself.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式(以及介词/时态和表达不当)。错误分析:原句中 “it is easy to me to learn the back” 用法不自然且语法不正确。正确表达应使用短语 “easy for someone to do something”。此外 “learn the back” 意义不明确,应改为更具体的动作(如 “ride backward” 或 “do a wheelie”);句中时态应与开头过去时一致,故把 “is” 改为过去时 “was”;“I got back by myself” 用法不自然,应改为 “I rode backward by myself” 或更合适的描述。改进建议:使用固定搭配 “easy for somebody to do something”;保持时态一致;用清晰的动词短语表达具体动作。例如多练习类似句型: “It was easy for me to learn to ride a bike” 或 “I learned to ride a bike by myself.”
× No, I think bikes are not more unpopular in my country. I'm come from China. In China recent years we usually use.
✓ No. I don't think bikes are that unpopular in my country. I'm from China. In recent years in China we usually use cars (or e-bikes) more often.
问题类型:形容词/副词使用不当以及句子结构问题。错误分析:短语 “not more unpopular” 是双重否定且结构不自然,应用更直接的表达如 “not that unpopular” 或 “less popular”。“I'm come from China” 时态和结构错误,正确表达为 “I'm from China” 或 “I come from China”。最后一句 “In China recent years we usually use.” 不完整,缺少宾语和正确的词序,且应为 “In recent years in China we usually use ...” 并补上所指代的事物(如 cars, e-bikes)。改进建议:避免双重或多余否定,使用自然短语;用简单现在时描述事实: “I am from...”;完整表达时间状语顺序为 “In recent years, in China, ...”,并补上具体名词。