Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so 'cause when I was born in 1993 and everyone do not have motorbike or cars, so they ride a bike a lot. So at that time everyone loves bike and that is a quite popular when someone getting married that is quite a big gift from the hospital to wife.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且时态错误,缺乏细节和连贯性。你应该用过去时直接回应并给出一两句支持细节,使用链接词让回答更自然。例如说明什么时候有、谁送的或你如何使用它。注意语法(过去时)和自然表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child because my parents bought it for me when I was seven. I used it to ride to school and to visit friends, so it was an important part of my childhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 内容较丰富但语法、时态和表达不够准确,句子冗长且不够连贯。建议用更清晰的逻辑组织回答:先给出总体观点,然后用具体事实或例子支持,使用连接词(for example, because, so)并注意主谓一致与时态一致。避免重复和模糊表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles were very popular in my country, especially in the 1990s. At that time many families could not afford cars or motorbikes, so bicycles were the main mode of transport. For example, my parents bought one for daily use, and people often gave bicycles as important gifts during weddings or after childbirth.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句在回答过去是否拥有自行车的问题时用了现在时(have),与考官使用的过去时间背景不一致。应使用过去时的助动词 did 或简单过去 I had。建议在回答过去发生的事情时使用过去时,例如 “Yes, I did.” 或 “Yes, I had one.”(简洁明了)。
× Yes, I think so 'cause when I was born in 1993 and everyone do not have motorbike or cars, so they ride a bike a lot.
✓ Yes, I think so, because when I was born in 1993, most people did not have motorbikes or cars, so they rode bikes a lot.
句中涉及过去事实,但使用了现在时态(do not have)和不准确的动词形式。应把描述过去的动词改为过去时(did not have,rode)。另外复数和可数名词的形式需注意(motorbikes 或 motorbikes and cars)。建议将时间状语(in 1993)与过去时一致,使用 'did not have' 和 'rode'。
× So at that time everyone loves bike and that is a quite popular when someone getting married that is quite a big gift from the hospital to wife.
✓ At that time everyone loved bikes, and giving a bike was quite common; when someone got married, a bike was often given as a fairly large gift from the hospital to the wife.
原句存在主谓一致(everyone loves 应为 everyone loved,描述过去应使用过去时)和名词单复数错误(bike → bikes),以及句子结构混乱。还要将动词短语改为过去时(getting married → got married)。建议把句子拆成两部分,用过去时描述习俗,并把名词用复数或加冠词,确保语序清晰。