Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, of course, when I was kid. I have a super bike as a toy. I usually oh.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes there has uh so many bikes uh for pedestrian it's a very common vehicle in my country uh also I I we have a bike uh it's a bullet 350CC uh it's my favorite bike and uh.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear past-tense statement, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if you add extra information and correct grammar (past tense, articles). Avoid filler words like “uh” and repetitions.
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because the roads were quiet, I learned to balance quickly and became confident riding without help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize your response: start with a clear opinion, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, and, also). Avoid confusing terms (a bike for pedestrians) and unnecessary fillers. Use correct sentence structure and consistent verb forms.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use scooters and motorcycles to commute to work, and I also own a Royal Enfield Bullet 350CC, which I use for longer rides on weekends.
× Yes, yes, of course, when I was kid.
✓ Yes, of course, when I was a kid.
Missing determiner 'a' before the noun 'kid' creates an ungrammatical noun phrase. Use 'a kid' for countable singular nouns. Suggestion: include the article 'a' with singular countable nouns ('a kid').
× I have a super bike as a toy.
✓ I had a toy bike that was super.
The question refers to the past (when you were a child), so the verb should be past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. Also 'super bike as a toy' is awkward; rephrase to 'a toy bike that was super' or 'a great toy bike'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with the time frame and use natural noun order ('toy bike').
× I usually oh.
✓ I usually did.
The fragment 'I usually oh' is incomplete and unclear. The speaker likely intended to say something habitual in the past, so use past tense 'I usually did' plus an object or clause (for example, 'I usually rode it'). Suggestion: complete the sentence with the habitual action: 'I usually rode it.'
× Yes there has uh so many bikes uh for pedestrian it's a very common vehicle in my country uh also I I we have a bike uh it's a bullet 350CC uh it's my favorite bike and uh.
✓ Yes, there are so many bikes for pedestrians; they are very common vehicles in my country. Also, I have a bike — a Bullet 350CC — which is my favorite.
Multiple errors: 'there has' is incorrect for existence; use 'there are' for plural 'bikes' (Grammar problem type: 'There be issue' and subject-verb agreement). 'For pedestrian' needs plural or article: 'for pedestrians'. 'It's a very common vehicle' should match plural 'bikes' -> 'they are very common vehicles' or rephrase singular. Pronoun/reference and run-on sentence issues require segmentation. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns, pluralize 'pedestrian' to 'pedestrians', and split into clear sentences; use relative clause 'which is my favorite' for the bike description.