Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I am seven years old, I have a bank.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 首先,语法时态和动词使用不正确。应使用过去时并把年龄表达为“when I was seven”。其次,“bank”显然是发音或用词错误,应该是“bike”。回答过于简短且信息不足。建议用一句主题句直接回答,然后补充一到两句具体细节(例如谁送的、你常去哪里骑、你最喜欢的记忆)。使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增加连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, so I rode it to the park every weekend and learned to ride without training wheels within a month.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且缺乏细节和理由。需要表达意见并给出具体理由或例子来支持观点,例如提到城市交通、环保或休闲运动的普及情况。使用连接词如“because”或“for example”来组织答案。避免简单的“Yes, I think.”,改为完整的句子并补充解释。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes to work and school. For example, in my city there are bike lanes and rental schemes, so cycling has become a convenient and eco-friendly option.
× Yes, when I am seven years old, I have a bank.
✓ Yes, when I was seven years old, I had a bike.
这是时态错误:叙述过去发生的事情时应使用过去时。原句用现在时("am/ have")不符合与过去时间状语("when I was seven years old")的一致性。并且原句中出现了单词错误("bank" 应为 "bike",根据提问对象)。改正建议:将动词变为过去式("am"→"was","have"→"had"),并把名词改为符合语境的 "bike"。
× Yes, I think.
✓ Yes, I think so.
虽然原句语法上可被接受,但为了回答更自然完整,通常在回答“Do you think...?”这类问题时,使用“Yes, I think so.”更符合英语习惯。这里不是严格的时态错误,但改为更地道的表达。建议:添加“so”使回答更自然完整。