Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I have a bike which I ride roaded every evening with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I do umm when we go to school we always read backs and and uh we usually read bags to go to many places like parks or shopping mall, supermarket.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和用词不准确,表达不够自然且有语法错误。回答应直接回应并补充具体细节,句子不宜过长且最多五句。建议: 1) 使用正确时态(过去式)和合适动词(ride, go for a ride); 2) 提供一到两个具体细节(例如骑车的地点、频率、感受或与谁一起); 3) 使用连接词使句子连贯,如“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every evening with my friend around our neighborhood. We often raced each other for fun because it was a safe area near our homes.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱且词汇使用错误(如“read backs/read bags”),句子缺乏清晰结构和具体支持细节。回答应直接表明观点并用一两个具体原因或例子支持。建议: 1) 使用明确词汇(bikes, ride, commute, students); 2) 给出具体原因(便宜、环保、交通方便)或场景(上学、买菜); 3) 控制句子长度,使用连接词如“because”、“for example”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students ride bikes to school and people often cycle to nearby markets or parks to avoid traffic.
× Yes I did. I have a bike which I ride roaded every evening with my friend.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike which I rode on the road every evening with my friend.
句中有多处问题: 1) 时态不一致——问题句问的是“当你是小孩时”,应使用过去时,因此 “I have a bike” 应改为过去时“I had a bike”。 2) 动词形式错误——“ride roaded” 是错误搭配。应使用过去式“rode”并且搭配介词“on the road”或直接说“rode my bike”。 改进建议:确定情境时态(here: 过去),把动词改为相应时态,并使用正确的动词短语,例如“I rode my bike every evening”或“I rode my bike on the road every evening”。
× Yes I do umm when we go to school we always read backs and and uh we usually read bags to go to many places like parks or shopping mall, supermarket.
✓ Yes, I do. When we go to school we always ride bikes, and we usually take our bikes to go to many places like parks, shopping malls, or the supermarket.
句子中主要问题是词汇误用和固定搭配错误: 1) “read backs” 和 “read bags” 是拼写/用词错误,应为“ride bikes”(骑自行车)或“ride our bikes”。 2) 复数与单数一致及并列名词形式:应使用复数“shopping malls”。 3) 可加入冠词“the supermarket”使表达更自然。 改进建议:注意常见动词搭配(ride a bike/ride bikes/take a bike),检查拼写,并保持并列项的数一致。