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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I prefer to walk to ride a bike after the school time because it's very relaxable and very.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, in my opinion, I think, uh, nowadays the bikes were not very popular in my country because there are a lot of transport, uh, transportation, uh, that people can choose it.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答时时态和语法不准确,句子结构混乱,信息不够具体,且冗长。建议:1) 使用正确时态(过去式)和简洁的主题句;2) 用1–2个支持细节说明原因或习惯,使用连接词如“because”或“so”;3) 控制长度在不超过5个句子内并避免重复。示例改进点:说明什么时候骑车、骑车的感觉或频率。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it home from school because it was faster than walking. Riding made me feel free and relaxed, so I enjoyed it a lot.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法(时态、数)和词汇使用不准确,充满口头语(uh)且表达不够具体。建议:1) 用简单明确的立场句(主句);2) 提供具体原因或例子作为支持,使用连接词如“because”或“for example”;3) 避免填充词,控制句子长度并保持连贯。

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country nowadays because many people prefer cars or public transport. For example, buses and subways are convenient and faster in cities, so fewer people choose cycling.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I prefer to walk to ride a bike after the school time because it's very relaxable and very.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I preferred to walk rather than ride a bike after school because it was very relaxing.

错在时态和用词。句首提到“when I was a child”应使用过去时(have → had)。接着的对比喜好也应用过去时(prefer → preferred)。短语“prefer to walk to ride a bike”结构不正确,常用表达为“prefer X rather than Y”或“prefer walking to riding”。“after the school time”不地道,应简化为“after school”。形容词“relaxable”不常用且错误,正确的形容词是“relaxing”。建议:讲过去经历时整体使用过去时,比较两项时用“prefer A rather than B”或“prefer A to B”,并使用常见词汇(relaxing)。

6: Present tense issue

× Well, in my opinion, I think, uh, nowadays the bikes were not very popular in my country because there are a lot of transport, uh, transportation, uh, that people can choose it.

Well, in my opinion, nowadays bikes are not very popular in my country because there are many means of transportation that people can choose.

主要时态和句子成分问题。句中“nowadays”表示现在,因此不应用过去时“were”,而应使用一般现在时“are”。“a lot of transport, transportation”重复且用词混乱,常用表达是“many means of transportation”或“many forms of transport”。从句末不需要多余代词“it”;应该说“that people can choose”。建议:根据时间状语选择正确时态,避免重复词汇,用固定搭配如“means of transportation”,从句不要多余添加代词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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