Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısında zaman uyumsuzluğu, telaffuz/kelime hatası ("back" yerine "bike") ve tekrar var. Ayrıca yanıt çok uzun ve düzensiz; daha doğal bir konu cümlesi ve bir veya iki destekleyici detay yeterli olur. Bağlaçlar kullanılarak mantıksal akış sağlanmalı. Öneri: Geçmiş zaman kullanımına dikkat edin, gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve kısa bir sebep ya da anı ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my favorite possession because I could ride to my friends' houses and explore the neighbourhood, which made me feel independent.

Gợi ý: Yanıt açık ama konuşma dolgu kelimeleri (umm, uh) ve zayıf bağlamlandırma var. "Connected to each other" ifadesi belirsiz; daha kesin dil kullanın ve bir neden-sonuç yapısı ile bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıksal akışı güçlendirin. Ayrıca birkaç spesifik örnek (ör. geniş yollar, az bisiklet yolu) ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Not really. Because most urban roads prioritise cars and there are few dedicated bike lanes, cyclists often lack safe space; for example, many main streets are wide and fast, which discourages people from cycling.

× Yes, I have a back when I was a child and it was the best thing that I that I have ever had in my life.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and it was the best thing that I ever had in my life.

The student used incorrect pronouns/words and mixed tenses. 'Have a back' is likely a typo for 'had a bike' and should be in the past tense to match 'when I was a child' (Grammar Problem Type 12 and 6). Also, 'that I that I have ever had' repeats 'that' and uses present perfect 'have ever had' which is inconsistent with the clear past-time reference 'when I was a child.' Use simple past 'had' to be consistent: 'it was the best thing I ever had.' Suggestion: replace incorrect words, remove duplication, and keep past tense for past-time events.

× Umm, not really. Because the traffic system and the roads are so connected to each other, the bikers, uh, don't really have enough space to, umm, use their bikes.

✓ Umm, not really. Because the traffic system and the roads are so congested and connected, bikers don't really have enough space to use their bikes.

The original sentence uses 'are so connected to each other' which is incorrect and unclear; the intended meaning is likely that roads are crowded or congested. This is a problem with word choice and present tense description (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also, remove filler words and unnecessary commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'are so congested and connected' or better 'are so congested' to describe the present situation, and keep the present simple 'don't have' for general truth.