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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think yes. Umm it's popular because kids wants them to ride a bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Be careful with tense and verb forms, and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in the simple past (because the question is about the past), then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid extra words like "do" with past statements. Use linking words only if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with a specific reason using correct subject-verb agreement and clearer linking words. Replace fillers like "Umm" and correct "wants" to "want." If possible add one specific example or comparison to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children and teenagers ride bikes for fun and exercise, and there are also bike-sharing schemes in cities that make cycling convenient for adults.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The original sentence mixes present tense ('do have') with past time reference ('when I was a kid'). Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past events (I had a bike).

Present tense issue

× I think yes. Umm it's popular because kids wants them to ride a bike.

I think so. Umm it's popular because kids want to ride bikes.

There are two issues: 'I think yes' is unnatural; 'I think so' is better. Also 'kids wants' has a subject-verb agreement error (plural subject needs base verb 'want'), and 'them to ride a bike' is awkward—use 'kids want to ride bikes' to match plural subject and plural object. Suggestion: Use 'want' with plural subjects and keep number consistent (kids/bikes).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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