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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think it is not really popular in my country because I live in a busy city and they always go to work on photo tape transportation.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,完全没有提供信息。建议:直接回应问题并给出一个简短的主题句,然后用一到两句补充细节(如什么时候、什么样的自行车、与谁一起骑或你为什么喜欢/不喜欢)。使用连接词使回答连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about six, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. I used to ride it with my friends almost every afternoon, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 内容能回答问题但表达不清且有语法和用词错误(如“photo tape transportation”不明确)。建议:先给出直接观点,使用连接词(because, however, for example),并提供具体原因或例子,比如交通拥堵、公共交通普及或骑行基础设施缺乏。注意主谓一致和代词用法(bikes they → people)。

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities, because people usually prefer fast public transport or cars. For example, in my city many commuters take the subway or buses due to long distances and heavy traffic, and there are few safe bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

17:Incorrect use of the definite article

× I think it is not really popular in my country because I live in a busy city and they always go to work on photo tape transportation.

I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because I live in a busy city and people usually go to work using public transportation.

存在多处错误: 1) 冠词/代词和主语不匹配:原句开头用 "I think it is not really popular",其中 "it" 指代不明确,且与复数名词 "bikes" 不一致。应改为 "I don't think bikes are very popular"(使用复数主语并用否定助动词构成自然表达)。 2) 词汇错误:原句的 "photo tape transportation" 并非正确表达,应为 "public transportation"(公共交通)。 3) 时态/频率副词表达:原句 "they always go to work" 中的 "they" 模糊,且更自然的说法是用 "people usually go to work" 表示人们通常的行为,同时把频率副词置于情态动词或助动词后/动词前以符合英语副词位置规则。 改进建议: - 指代要明确,复数名词前不要用单数代词 "it"; - 使用常见搭配,如 "public transportation"; - 频率副词可用 "usually" 替代 "always"(如果想表达通常情况),并放在助动词/实义动词前以使句子自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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