Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well, just like every child, children, uh, I have my own bike in my childhood, uh, when I want to the cycling with my friends or my sister, I bike it, uh, on my, uh, on my daily route and uh, to tell the trust I like my childhood bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my perspective view, everyone ride a bike in my, uh, country every day in the morning I shower, uh, lots of people who are, uh, ride a biking in their roads and uh, every day me and my friend ride, uh, our bike and, uh, that's very funny to us.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Javobni qisqaroq va tartibli qiling: avvalo to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri savolga javob bering (ha/yo‘q), so‘ngasi sabab yoki qisqa misol keltiring. Keraksiz takrorlardan va 'uh' kabi sukutlardan saqlaning. Grammatikani tuzating (masalan, 'I had a bike', 'I rode it', 'I used to cycle with my friends'). Bitta yoki ikki qo‘shimcha jumlani ishlating, ularda bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, so, for example) foydalaning.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every day with my friends and my sister along our neighborhood streets. I especially loved it because it gave me freedom and helped me explore nearby parks.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq va strukturali qiling: avvalo fikringizni to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri ayting (ha/yo‘q yoki daraja), keyin qisqa dalil yoki misol bilan qo‘llab-quvvatlang. Keraksiz so‘zlardan va aralash jumlalardan qoching. To‘g‘ri fe’l shakllaridan foydalaning (people ride, we ride), bog‘lovchilar (for example, because, often) ishlating va so‘z boyligini oshiring (commonly, popular, commute).
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school, especially in the morning, because they are cheap and convenient. For example, my friends and I often ride together on weekends.
× Well, just like every child, children, uh, I have my own bike in my childhood, uh, when I want to the cycling with my friends or my sister, I bike it, uh, on my, uh, on my daily route and uh, to tell the trust I like my childhood bike.
✓ Well, like every child, I had my own bike when I was a child. When I wanted to go cycling with my friends or my sister, I rode it on my usual route, and to tell the truth I liked my childhood bike.
The sentence mixes singular and plural forms ('every child, children') which is confusing. Use a single consistent subject: 'every child' or 'children'. Also verb forms must match past time frame ('have' -> 'had', 'want' -> 'wanted'). Suggestion: decide on singular subject and keep verb tense consistent in past narrative.
× In my perspective view, everyone ride a bike in my, uh, country every day in the morning I shower, uh, lots of people who are, uh, ride a biking in their roads and uh, every day me and my friend ride, uh, our bike and, uh, that's very funny to us.
✓ In my perspective, everyone rides a bike in my country. Every morning many people ride bikes on the roads, and every day my friend and I ride our bikes; it's a lot of fun for us.
The subject 'everyone' requires third person singular verb 'rides' not 'ride'. Also use 'my friend and I' for subject order and 'bikes' plural to match each person. 'That's very funny to us' is better expressed as 'it's a lot of fun for us.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everyone' and use correct pronoun order.