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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, is a cheap bike and really interesting for child and children.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь занадто коротка й граматично неточна. Скажіть чітко у минулому часі, додайте коротке пояснення або спогад, використовуючи 1–3 додаткові речення, пов’язані зв’язками (наприклад, "when", "because", "so"). Уникайте односкладових відповідей і надавайте конкретні деталі (кольори, вік, де ви їздили).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon because my friends and I loved racing along the paths.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь містить граматичні помилки та нечітку структуру; деталі дуже загальні. Почніть із чіткої теми, потім наведіть 1–2 конкретні причини або приклади, використовуючи зв’язки (наприклад, "because", "for example", "so"). Уникайте тавтології і використовуйте відповідну лексику (наприклад, "children", "affordable").

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical. For example, many families buy bikes for children to ride to school or for weekend outings, and there are also bike lanes in several cities which encourage cycling.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have.

Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Use past tense in the short answer. Replace present perfect/present ('have') with past simple auxiliary 'did' plus appropriate short answer 'I did'. Suggestion: Respond to past questions with past tense short answers (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't').

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, of course, is a cheap bike and really interesting for child and children.

Yes, of course. Bikes are cheap and very interesting for children.

Multiple errors: sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect article and singular/plural forms. The speaker attempted to refer to bikes generally, so use plural subject 'Bikes' and plural object 'children'. Replace 'is a cheap bike' with 'Bikes are cheap' and 'really interesting for child and children' with 'very interesting for children'. Also split into two clearer clauses. Suggestion: Start general statements with the subject (Bikes) and ensure nouns, verbs, and adjectives agree in number and form (e.g., 'Bikes are popular and interesting for children').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
InterestingAbsorbing
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