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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I always ride the bike to the park and hang out with my friends. And yeah, I had really good time with my bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bikes are popular in my country because right now the traffic is so bad in the cities and people are like they want to do something that is environment friendly right now, so everybody rides a bike.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 句子需要更规范的时态和更清晰的结构。回答应以主题句开头,接着用1-2个支持细节并用连接词衔接。注意动词时态一致(过去时),避免冗余表达,并提供具体细节(例如年龄、地点或一次印象深刻的经历)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the local park near my house to meet friends, and we would race each other on the weekends. Because we spent so much time outdoors, I have many fond memories of those days.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁并使用更合适的词汇和连词。先给出直接观点,然后用2-3个具体原因或例子支持。避免口语填充词(如 'like'、'right now' 重复)。可提及政府政策、共享单车或通勤习惯等具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. One reason is severe traffic congestion in cities, which makes cycling faster for short journeys, and another is the recent growth of bike-sharing programs and better cycling lanes, which have encouraged more people to ride.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I always ride the bike to the park and hang out with my friends.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I always rode the bike to the park and hung out with my friends.

原句在描述过去的习惯时,主句用的是过去时(had),但后面却使用了现在时(ride、hang out),时态不一致。应使用过去时的动词形式表示过去经常发生的动作:"ride" 改为过去式 "rode","hang out" 改为过去式 "hung out"。建议:描述过去的习惯或动作时,全句统一使用过去时态(例如:used to / would / 过去式)。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× And yeah, I had really good time with my bike.

And yeah, I had a really good time with my bike.

原句缺少不定冠词 "a",而根据题单分类,这属于形容词/副词使用问题(句子中形容词短语需要冠词搭配)。正确短语为 "had a good time"。此外,"really good" 前应有冠词修饰名词 "time"。建议:固定搭配记忆,如 "have a good time"。

Present tense issue

× I think bikes are popular in my country because right now the traffic is so bad in the cities and people are like they want to do something that is environment friendly right now, so everybody rides a bike.

I think bikes are popular in my country because right now the traffic is so bad in the cities and people want to do something that is environmentally friendly, so everybody rides a bike.

原句存在时态和词类使用问题:"people are like they want to do..." 是口语冗余且结构不正确,属于时态/句子结构问题,应去掉冗余的 "are like",直接用 "people want to do..."。另外,"environment friendly" 应为副词或形容词形式的正确拼写 "environmentally friendly"。建议:避免口语填充词(如 "are like")在正式答案中;使用正确的形容词/副词搭配(environmentally friendly)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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