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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, but I have a brother, he has a back so I can ride his back.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Actually, of course. In the big city you can see sharing bags everywhere, so I think it's very popular.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且含混,语法和用词有明显错误。首先没有直接回应“小时候是否有自行车”——应该用过去时并明确说“没有”。其次句子结构混乱(“he has a back”不合逻辑,想表达借骑兄弟的自行车应说“ride his bike”或“ride on his back”),并且缺乏细节。建议用一到两句直接回答,再用一到两句补充具体细节,例如谁的自行车、什么时候骑、感受或原因。注意时态一致和简单清晰的词汇。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I often rode my brother’s bike when he let me, which was fun but a little scary because it was too big for me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答方向正确但表达模糊和用词不准(“sharing bags”不清楚,可能想说“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”)。句子可以更自然并提供具体例子或比较,如在大城市常见、用于短途通勤、与公交地铁互补等。使用连接词使逻辑更清晰,例如先给出观点,然后举例说明。保持一到两句支持细节即可。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular, especially in big cities. For example, bike-sharing services are everywhere and many people use them for short commutes or to get to public transport.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, but I have a brother, he has a back so I can ride his back.

No, but I have a brother; he has a bike so I can ride his bike.

句中将“bike”误写为“back”,且使用逗号连接两个独立分句造成句子结构不佳。首先,back是“背”的意思,不符合语境,应为bike(自行车)。其次,两个独立分句之间应使用分号、句号或连接词来分隔以避免逗号拼接错误(comma splice)。建议:1)把back改为bike以符合语境;2)用分号或句号分开两个独立分句,或者用连词(例如 and)连接。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually, of course. In the big city you can see sharing bags everywhere, so I think it's very popular.

Actually, of course. In the big cities you can see shared bikes everywhere, so I think they're very popular.

原句有几个问题:1)“In the big city”在泛指多座城市时应使用复数形式“big cities”;2)“sharing bags”显然为拼写或词语使用错误,应为“shared bikes”或“shared bicycles”(共享单车);3)时态与指代不一致,最后用单数“it's”指代复数名词应改为“they're”。建议:将“big city”改为“big cities”,“sharing bags”改为“shared bikes”,并把“it's”改为“they're”以保持数的一致性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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