BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, others use use bicycles go to work for instead of commuting.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it's very short and could be expanded with a brief reason or a short anecdote to sound more natural and engaging. Keep the response under five sentences and add one or two supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "but").

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn't enough space to store one. However, I often borrowed bikes from neighbors on weekends, so I learned to ride early.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your idea is relevant but the sentence has grammar and clarity problems and repeats a word. Make a clear topic sentence, correct word order, and add a specific detail or reason using a linking word (e.g., "for example", "because"). Aim for one concise supporting detail. Avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work to avoid traffic and save money. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and many office workers cycle daily.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, others use use bicycles go to work for instead of commuting.

Yes, others use bicycles to go to work instead of commuting.

The sentence has multiple issues: a repeated word 'use', incorrect infinitive/preposition 'go to work for', and a pronoun/subject phrasing 'others' that is acceptable but the construction needs correct verb patterns. According to the requested error types, the main applicable issue is incorrect use of pronouns/subject phrasing and verb patterns (map to 'Incorrect use of pronouns'). The correct form is 'use bicycles to go to work' because after 'use' the object 'bicycles' is followed by an infinitive of purpose 'to go'. Remove the duplicate 'use'. Use 'to' before the verb 'go' to indicate purpose. Suggestion: say 'Yes, many people use bicycles to go to work instead of commuting by car.'

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