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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I didn't have a bike when I was a child but I remember my father was borrow a bike for me and he teach me how to ride a bike with my sister Umm.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bike are popular in my country in Hong Kong and nowadays have a lot of share bike and people can ride anytime.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然和正确的语法表达过去事实,句子结构应更清晰并减少冗余。注意动词时态和被动/主动形式(例如:"borrowed"、"taught"),去掉无意义的停顿词(如"Umm")。可以先直接回答(主题句),然后用一到两句具体细节补充,例如谁借的、在哪里学的、学骑车的经历感受。

Ví dụ: I didn't own a bike as a child. My father borrowed one for me and my sister, and he taught us how to ride in the park near our home. I remember feeling nervous at first, but after a few tries I became much more confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 注意主谓一致和名词复数(如"bikes are"),并使用连词或短语使句子更连贯。提供更具体的支持细节,例如共享单车的优点、使用场景或数据(如果知道的话)。遵循先给直接观点,再用1–2句详细说明的结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Hong Kong. In recent years many companies have introduced bike-sharing services, which make short trips convenient and affordable for commuters and tourists. As a result, more people cycle for leisure and short-distance travel.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child but I remember my father was borrow a bike for me and he teach me how to ride a bike with my sister Umm.

I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I remember my father borrowed a bike for me and he taught me how to ride a bike with my sister.

错误类型:过去时错误(ID 5)。说明:句中“was borrow”是不正确的过去式表达;应使用动词的过去式“borrowed”。同样“teach”在上下文为过去时,应改为“taught”。建议:在描述过去发生的动作时,统一使用动词的过去式。把被动似的短语“was borrow”改为主动过去式“borrowed”,并将“teach”改为过去式“taught”。此外在连词“but”前加逗号使句子更清晰。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think bike are popular in my country in Hong Kong and nowadays have a lot of share bike and people can ride anytime.

I think bikes are popular in my country, in Hong Kong, and nowadays there are a lot of shared bikes so people can ride anytime.

错误类型:主谓一致(ID 27)和其他相关问题(混合)。说明:原句用“bike are”主语单复数不一致,应为复数“bikes are”。“nowadays have a lot of share bike”结构不完整,缺主语且“share bike”应为形容词化的“shared bikes”。建议:将“bike”改为复数“bikes”,在表示存在时使用“there are”,并把“share bike”改为“shared bikes”。另外用连词或逗号连接子句,使句子更通顺。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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