Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have the bike when I was a child that a parent bought for me and I'd often rode it with my family to the nearby park on weekends.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think the bike is very popular in Taiwan and people usually road bike, go to school or go to the company.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子有时态和语法错误,表达不够自然。回答应直接以一句主题句开头,然后用一到两句具体细节支持,避免冗长或多余的信息。注意动词时态(一致使用过去式)、冠词和代词,使用连接词使句子更流畅。举例:先说“是/有”,再补充谁买的、何时、频率和地点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought a small red bike for me when I was six, and I often rode it with my family to a nearby park on weekends. Those rides were fun because we could play on the grass and have picnics together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 表达存在词汇和搭配错误,句子结构不够自然且细节不够具体。应直接给出观点,然后用具体例子或场景支持(如上班通勤、上学、休闲骑行),并使用正确搭配和动词形式。可以用连接词(for example, especially)使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in Taiwan. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school, and others enjoy road cycling and weekend leisure rides along the coast. This popularity is helped by good bike lanes and convenient rental systems.
× Yes, I have the bike when I was a child that a parent bought for me and I'd often rode it with my family to the nearby park on weekends.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child that my parents bought for me, and I often rode it with my family to the nearby park on weekends.
错误类型:现在时/过去时使用错误与主谓所有格错误。说明:句子开头问的是过去是否拥有,原句使用“I have”不符合过去时,应改为“had”。“a parent bought for me”应改为“my parents bought for me”以表达是自己父母且注意所有格;此外“I'd often rode”结构错误,缩写“I'd”在此语境应为“I”+过去常态“often rode”,不应使用助动词+过去式。改进建议:把与过去相关的动词都用过去时(had, bought, rode),把单数不明确的“a parent”改为“my parents”或“my parent”,并避免使用助动词加过去式,若用助动词(did)后接动词原形:“I often rode”或“I used to ride”。
× I think the bike is very popular in Taiwan and people usually road bike, go to school or go to the company.
✓ I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan and people usually ride bikes to school or to work.
错误类型:量词/名词单复数和动词选择错误。说明:原句中“the bike”不合适,谈论普遍现象应使用复数“bikes”或不定泛指。动词“road bike”用法错误,应为“ride bikes”或“road”作动词需与自行车搭配时用“ride”。“go to the company”表达不自然,常用“go to work”。改进建议:表述普遍事实时使用复数或泛指形式(bikes are),使用正确动词搭配“ride bikes”,以及用自然的短语“go to school/ go to work”。