Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I like to ride a bike when I was a kid and I think it's very convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
It depends, when I was a kid uh the bike is very popular but now maybe cars are more popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接回应问题并使用正确时态,句子要更自然且不冗长。避免时态混用(例如现在时与过去时冲突),并用1-2个具体细节丰富回答,同时使用衔接词使表达更连贯。可以将回答控制在最多5句内。示例改进点:①把主题句放在首句并使用过去时;②提供具体细节(什么时候、在哪里或和谁一起骑);③用连接词(e.g. because, so, also)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I rode it to school and to the park almost every day because it was fast and cheap. Riding with my friends after classes was one of my favorite pastimes, so I learned to be confident on the road.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并使用合适时态與連接词表达对比。避免模糊词(如 uh、maybe)并给出具体原因或例子支持观点。使用比较结构(e.g. more popular than before)和理由(交通、经济、城市化)。句子不宜过长且保持清晰逻辑。
Ví dụ: I think bikes were much more popular when I was a child, but nowadays cars are more common. This is because many families can now afford cars and cities have become more spread out, so people prefer driving for convenience.
× Yes, of course. I like to ride a bike when I was a kid and I think it's very convenient.
✓ Yes, of course. I liked to ride a bike when I was a kid and I thought it was very convenient.
句子中混用了过去时和现在时:“when I was a kid”表示过去时间,主句应使用过去时态以保持时态一致。将 like 改为 liked,将 I think 改为 I thought,并把 it is 改为 it was。建议:描述过去的经历时,主句和从句都应使用过去时。
× It depends, when I was a kid uh the bike is very popular but now maybe cars are more popular.
✓ It depends. When I was a kid, bikes were very popular, but now maybe cars are more popular.
原句在时态和主谓一致上有问题。描述过去情况时应使用过去时,主语 bikes(复数)与动词 were 保持一致;原句用 the bike is(单数现在时)不符合。把句子拆为两部分并调整为:When I was a kid, bikes were very popular。建议:谈及过去习惯或状况时,使用过去时并注意主语单复数与动词一致。