Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think not, because bikes are uh, not not uh. We there are very motorcycle and car.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答重复了考官的问题,且没有给出任何信息。请直接回答问题并补充一到两句具体细节(例如什么时候、用来做什么、与谁一起骑等),句子不超过五句。使用连接词(例如"also","but","because")使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six and rode it to school every day. It helped me make friends in the neighborhood, and I still remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达含糊、有重复填充词且语法错误较多。请先给出明确的主题句,然后用一至两句具体原因或对比支持你的观点,使用连接词(例如"because","however","instead")。避免重复语言填充词,注意主谓一致和名词复数形式。
Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles and cars for convenience. However, bicycles are becoming more common in cities for short trips and exercise.
× I think not, because bikes are uh, not not uh. We there are very motorcycle and car.
✓ I don't think so, because there are many motorcycles and cars.
句子结构混乱:原句中有重复的填充词“not not uh”和错误的词序“We there are very motorcycle and car”。正确表达是先否定(I don't think so),然后说明原因(because there are many motorcycles and cars)。建议用固定表达“I don't think so”来表示否定意见;在列举可数名词时用复数形式并用数量词,如“many motorcycles and cars”。另外注意英语中主语与存在句的结构,不要把主语“We”与存在结构“there are”混用。