Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is good trail.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有正面回应考官的问题,只是重复了问题。请直接给出一个主题句(有或没有),然后用一到两句具体细节支持,比如什么时候得到的,谁给的,常去哪儿骑,以及你的感受。注意总句数不超过五句,使用连词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my eighth birthday, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. I especially liked riding to the park with my friends because we would race and play games. It helped me feel independent and active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够直接也不够详细,且与问题不完全相关。请先直接回答肯定或否定,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子来支持你的观点,例如道路/骑行道数量、通勤或健身用途,并使用连接词使语句连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with many bike lanes. Many people use bicycles for short commutes and exercise, and there are also dedicated cycling trails that attract families and cyclists on weekends.
× Did you have a bike when you were a child?
✓ Yes, I did.
学生在回答第一问时直接重复了考官的问题句子,而没有给出完整的回答。根据英语问答习惯,过去时疑问句(Did you have...?)的肯定回答应使用助动词 did 加主语和动词原形,或用简短回答“Yes, I did.”。建议:用简短回答或完整句子,例如“I had a bike when I was a child.” 或 “Yes, I did.”。
× Yes, it is good trail.
✓ Yes, they are popular. / Yes, cycling is popular.
原句中使用了代词“it”来指代“bikes”,这是单复数和代词指代不一致的问题。另外“good trail”语义不符合提问“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”,此问询的是自行车是否受欢迎,而不是车道是否好。正确的回答应直接回应“bikes”或“cycling”,并保持主谓一致:bikes(复数)对应 they;也可把主语改为不可数名词 cycling。建议:使用“they are popular”或“cycling is popular”等句式。