Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и грамотно: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных подробностей. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «short time» → «for a short time», «can injure» → неверное слово; вероятно, вы имели в виду «enjoy» или «experience»). Уменьшите длину и повторения, используйте связку «because» или «because of» для объяснения причины.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but only for a short time because my family moved. I still remember learning to ride it in the park, which was exciting and gave me confidence to try other sports later.

Gợi ý: Дайте более связный и точный ответ: начните с прямого мнения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных факта или примерa. Избегайте повторов («in park in the parks») и заполнителей («umm»). Используйте связочные слова (for example, moreover) и более подходящие слова («exercise» вместо «exercising», «lanes» вместо «lines»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many cities have bike lanes in parks and on main roads, and people often cycle for exercise or commuting, especially on weekends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I had it very short time and I think that having a bike and knowing how to ride it is the best experience that a child can injure.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I had it for a very short time, and I think that having a bike and knowing how to ride it is the best experience a child can have.

The sentence misuses past-tense phrasing and contains incorrect verbs and missing prepositions. 'had it very short time' needs the preposition 'for' and the adjective 'short' should be 'short time' preceded by 'a' and 'very' → 'for a very short time'. The clause 'a child can injure' uses the wrong verb; the intended meaning is possession/experience, so use 'can have'. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'for a very short time' and replace 'can injure' with 'can have' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think so. Bikes are really popular in my country and people ride bikes and also they have their own lines in park in the parks and I think that it's a great, umm, exercising to do.

✓ I think so. Bikes are really popular in my country and people ride them, and there are bike lanes in parks. I think it's a great form of exercise.

There are several preposition and word choice errors. Use the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition: 'people ride them'. 'have their own lines in park in the parks' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'there are bike lanes in parks' (use 'in' with 'parks' and 'lane' not 'line'). 'a great, umm, exercising to do' mixes noun forms; the correct phrase is 'a great form of exercise' or 'great exercise'. Also simplify filler words. Suggestion: use 'ride them', 'there are bike lanes in parks', and 'a great form of exercise'.