Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Frankly, I have a bike in my childhood but I don't actually know how to ride it, so it's kind of boring for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not at all, but I have been to other country. They are more popular than our country 'cause everyone's go out by bikes. But in my country it's hard to see people riding bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法准确。你的回答不够自然,时态和表达有错误,句子也有些冗长。建议使用简单清晰的过去时开头一个主题句,然后用一两句支持细节(为什么不会骑、是否想学或别的回忆),并使用连接词使句子更连贯。注意时态一致(过去发生的事用过去时),避免口语化填充词如“kind of”。
Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. Because my parents were overprotective, they didn't let me practice on the road, so it stayed unused in our garage. Later I wished I had learned, and I sometimes tried again with friends to catch up.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确和连贯。你的观点明确但语法和用词有错误,缺少具体细节与比较。建议先给出直接答案,再用具体例子比较两个国家(如城市基础设施、文化或天气),用连接词如 “however”, “for example” 增强逻辑,并注意单复数和冠词。避免过度口语缩写('cause)。
Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer cars because our cities lack safe bike lanes. However, in countries I visited, many people cycle daily due to good cycling infrastructure and shorter distances between places.
× Frankly, I have a bike in my childhood but I don't actually know how to ride it, so it's kind of boring for me.
✓ Frankly, I had a bike in my childhood but I didn't actually know how to ride it, so it was kind of boring for me.
问题类型:现在时使用不当。句子描述的是过去的情况(童年),因此动词时态应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had,don't know 改为 didn't know,is 改为 was。建议:当描述过去发生的动作或状态时,统一使用过去时态,注意句子中所有涉及过去时间的动词一致。
× Not at all, but I have been to other country.
✓ Not at all, but I have been to another country.
问题类型:句子结构/词语使用错误。短语 'other country' 用法不正确,应为 'another country' 来表示“别的国家”。此外句首的 'Not at all, but' 在语义上有些不自然,建议口语中可以说 'Not really. I have been to another country.' 建议:学习不定代词用法,'another' 用于可数单数名词表示另一个,'other' 多用于复数或与限定词连用。
× They are more popular than our country 'cause everyone's go out by bikes.
✓ Bicycles are more popular there than in our country because everyone goes out by bike.
问题类型:主谓一致和句子构造问题。原句中 'everyone's go' 把 everyone 和动词形式冲突。everyone 是单数,需要用单三形式 goes;此外比较对象和介词短语需要更清晰表达:'more popular than our country' 应改为 'more popular there than in our country'。'by bikes' 更常见的说法是 'by bike'(整体方式)。建议:注意 everyone 与单数动词配合,比较句要明确比较双方并使用适当的介词(in/there),以及常用交通方式表达是 'by bike'。
× But in my country it's hard to see people riding bikes.
✓ But in my country it's hard to see people riding bikes.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(审阅结果:此句原句时态和结构实际上正确,无需更改)。说明:该句描述的是一般事实,使用现在时 'it's hard to see' 和现在分词 'riding' 是恰当的。建议:保持不变。