Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bag that my father buy for me at my seven years old because it is my birthday gift.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, because I think it is a good way to protect the environment and a good way to go out.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和内容需要改进。首先时态错误和名词使用错误(用bag而非bike),动词形式和定冠词/数词搭配不当。应直接回答并给一两句具体补充,例如说明什么时候得到的、是谁送的、当时的感受或用途。控制在1–4句内并使用连接词以保持连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike for my seventh birthday, and I was really excited. I used it every day to ride around my neighborhood and play with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答总体明确且相关,但可以更具体并使用连接词拓展理由。提供具体例子或比较(如城市与农村、通勤或休闲用途)会更有说服力,并注意用词自然性(例如 use 'going out'或 'traveling')。保持不超过4句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities, because they are cheap and eco-friendly. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes to work or school, and there are also bike-sharing programs in several urban areas.
× Yes, I have a bag that my father buy for me at my seven years old because it is my birthday gift.
✓ Yes, I had a bike that my father bought for me when I was seven years old because it was my birthday gift.
句子中谈论的是过去发生的事情,应使用过去时。原句中“have”应为过去式“had”;“buy”应为过去式“bought”;“at my seven years old”结构不正确,应该用时间状语从句“when I was seven years old”;生日礼物也发生在过去,所以“is”应为过去时“was”。建议:叙述过去经历时全部用过去时,并用“when I was + 年龄”表示年龄。
× Yes, I do, because I think it is a good way to protect the environment and a good way to go out.
✓ Yes, I do, because I think they are a good way to protect the environment and a good way to go out.
句子在问“bikes”(复数)是否流行,回答中指代应与复数主语一致。原句用“It is”指代“bikes”,主谓不一致,应使用复数代词或复数动词“they are”。建议:在指代复数名词时使用复数主语/代词并保持动词一致。