Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”), avoid filler sounds (“uh”), and use one or two supporting details (age, who gave it to you, or a memory). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my seventh birthday, and I rode it every day around the neighborhood until I was ten.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and specific. Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “however”). Avoid repeating filler words and clarify ambiguous claims (e.g., cite reasons like cost, convenience, or traffic).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or run errands in crowded cities, especially where public transport is limited.

× Yes, I do hide a bike when I was a child. Uh.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense auxiliary 'do' with a past-time clause ('when I was a child'). The correct tense is simple past 'had' to match the time reference. Use 'had' for possession in the past. Suggestion: remove 'do' and use past form of the verb (had) so the sentence reads 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country as uh, most of the people uh, go to their jobs, uh, do their daily work through bikes, uh, which are often driven by men.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most people go to their jobs and do their daily work on bikes, which are often ridden by men.

Multiple issues: unnecessary filler words removed and tense/verb choices corrected. 'As' used as causal connector is acceptable but 'because' is clearer. 'Most of the people' is wordy; 'most people' is preferred. 'Do their daily work through bikes' is incorrect preposition and phrasing; use 'do their daily work on bikes.' 'Driven by men' is incorrect verb for bicycles; use 'ridden by men.' Suggestions: use 'because' for clear cause, simplify 'most people,' use 'on bikes' and 'ridden' for correct verb choice and preposition.