Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. My parents bought a bike for me due to the reason that they thought it's a useful skill that I need to obtain. Besides, it also can keep me fit.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Most people were to ride bike after their walk or study. It's a great way to do exercise and relieve stress.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,但有几处问题需要改进:1) 句子结构不够自然(例如“due to the reason that”冗长,应使用更简洁表达);2) 时态和语法需注意(“they thought it's”应改为“they thought it was”);3) 可补充1–2个具体细节让回答更丰富,比如你学骑车的年龄或记忆;4) 保持回答在最多5句内并使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。建议练习更自然的表达和正确的时态。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about seven because they believed learning to ride was an important skill. It also helped me stay active, and I still remember practicing in the park every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答思路正确,但存在语法和表达问题:1) “Most people were to ride bike after their walk or study”语法错误且不自然,应改为更准确的描述;2) 可提供更具体的例子或比较(例如不同年龄段或城市与乡村差别);3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯,如“for example”或“in addition”;4) 注意单复数和冠词(ride a bike, do exercise)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. Many people ride a bike for exercise or to relax after work or studying; for example, you can often see students cycling around campus and families riding together in parks.
× My parents bought a bike for me due to the reason that they thought it's a useful skill that I need to obtain.
✓ My parents bought a bike for me because they thought it was a useful skill that I needed to learn.
句子中多处问题:1) “due to the reason that”冗余且不地道,改为 because(该项归类为动名词/现在分词错误范围内,按清单第10项处理);2) 时态不一致:主句为过去时(bought),从句应使用过去时(thought)且 it 后的系动词应为过去时 was;3) “need to obtain”搭配不自然,通常说 learn 或 acquire skill。建议:使用 because 简洁表达原因,保持时态一致(过去),用 natural collocation(learn)。
× Besides, it also can keep me fit.
✓ Besides, it could/also kept me fit.
原句中结构问题:在描述过去拥有自行车的情况时,应使用与过去时间一致的情态或动词形式。原句用了 can(现在时),与上下文过去时不一致。可改为 could(过去的能力/可能)或直接用 kept(简单过去)表示结果。建议:与上下文时态一致,选择 could 或 kept。
× Most people were to ride bike after their walk or study.
✓ Most people ride bikes after their walk or studies.
原句存在多个问题:1) “were to ride”用法不当,通常表示计划或命令,非描述习惯;应使用一般现在时表示习惯;2) “ride bike”缺少冠词或复数搭配,习惯表达为 ride bikes;3) “study”作名词时常用复数或 plural studies 表示学习活动,或改为 studying 作为动名词。建议:用一般现在时 ride bikes 表示普遍习惯,改为 "after their walk or studies" 或 "after walking or studying"。
× It's a great way to do exercise and relieve stress.
✓ It's a great way to get exercise and relieve stress.
“do exercise”在英语中不如 get exercise 或 exercise 更自然。此句中的动词不定式和动名词搭配要注意自然搭配。保持 it is(现在时)描述普遍事实合适。建议使用 get exercise 或 simply exercise。