Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and fluent: give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example, state simply that you didn’t own a bike, then add where or how you used bikes (e.g., borrowed or rode in the park) using a linking word like “but” or “however.” Also correct tense and verb forms (“played” → “rode”).

Ví dụ: No, I didn't own a bike when I was a child, but I often rode my friends' bikes in the park. For example, every Saturday afternoon we would meet at the central park and ride for an hour, which I really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy and coherence: start with a direct statement, then use a linking word (e.g., “because” or “mainly”) to give two specific reasons (transport and health). Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g., “they are used by many people” or “cycling is a common habit”). Keep it to two to three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable way to commute and many people use them to stay fit. For instance, commuters cycle to work in big cities, and weekend cycling clubs are common for exercise.

× If I remember it well, Uh, I only play it in the park with my friends.

✓ If I remember it well, uh, I only played it in the park with my friends.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Play' is present tense; change to 'played' to match the past context. Suggestion: use simple past for actions completed in childhood (I played).

× No, I didn't have repeat. I repeat again, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have one. I repeat, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The original uses 'repeat' incorrectly as a noun/verb placement and lacks a pronoun after 'have'. Replace with 'one' to refer to 'a bike' and use 'I repeat' as the verb phrase. Also remove redundant 'again'. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't have one' or 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes, of course, the bikes are really popular in my country and it's used for a lot of people and practically is a habit to maintain your health and practice exercise.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are really popular in my country; they are used by a lot of people and are practically a habit to maintain health and get exercise.

Multiple pronoun and agreement issues: 'the bikes' is unnecessarily definite; 'it's used for a lot of people' incorrectly uses 'it' (singular) for plural 'bikes' and wrong preposition. Use 'they are used by a lot of people'. Also 'practically is a habit' is awkward; use 'are practically a habit' to agree with plural subject. 'Practice exercise' is incorrect collocation; use 'get exercise' or 'exercise'. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to plural subject and use natural collocations.