Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear past-tense topic sentence, correct grammar, and coherent details. Avoid contradictions (you first say no, then say you had a bicycle). Use linking words (for example, because, so) and keep the response natural and concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences). Mention specific details (age, who you rode with, where you rode) to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was very young because my parents couldn’t afford one. Later, when I turned ten, they bought me a simple bicycle, and I used to ride it in the local park every afternoon. I often cycled to school with my friend, which was fun and convenient.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with organized, specific reasons and linking words (for example, because, also, moreover). Use accurate vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "many office workers", "teenagers enjoy", "people who work informally"). Provide one or two concrete examples or comparisons to make your point stronger.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many office workers use them to commute to save money and avoid traffic. Also, teenagers often cycle together for exercise and fun, and some people earn money by delivering goods or renting out bicycles in busy areas.

× No, I don't have a bag in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood.

The student used the present negative 'don't have' for a past situation and referred to 'bag' instead of 'bike' (likely a word choice error). Use past tense for past time expressions: 'didn't have'. Also use the correct noun 'bike' to answer the question. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× My parents can't afford me to buy me a bike and but I have a bicycle and I ride most of the time in my park and I go to my school by my bicycle.

✓ My parents couldn't afford to buy me a bike, but I did have a bicycle and I rode it most of the time in the park, and I went to school by bicycle.

Multiple issues: 'can't afford me to buy me' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'couldn't afford to buy me (something)'. Use past tense 'couldn't' because referring to childhood. Remove extra 'and' before 'but'. Use past tense verbs 'did have', 'rode', 'went' to match past timeframe. Use 'it' to refer back to the bicycle and 'by bicycle' or 'by bike' for means of transport. Suggestion: simplify into shorter clauses and keep consistent past tense.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because maximum office person using bike for their daily life and many teenagers are like to share bike riding and many jobless person using bike by income.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many office workers use bikes for their daily commute, many teenagers like to ride and share bikes, and many unemployed people use bikes to earn an income.

The original contains incorrect present-tense verb forms and noun forms: 'maximum office person' should be 'many office workers'; 'using bike' should be 'use bikes'; 'are like to' is incorrect — use 'like to'; 'jobless person' should be 'unemployed people'; 'using bike by income' is unclear — use 'use bikes to earn an income'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun forms. Suggestion: use plural nouns for groups and base verb form 'use' for present simple statements about habits or facts.