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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did. I have a small red back and I usually rode it around my near borehole with my friends because it was easy to use and find. For example, it often routed to the park after school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I think banks are quietly, uh, are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and they're cheap and convenient. For example, in big cities you can see a lot of shared bags and people reading to work.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 用简洁、连贯且准确的句子直接回答问题;注意时态一致、词汇正确和句子结构。你应该使用过去时描述儿时经历,纠正拼写和用词错误(比如 bicycle/bike, back→bike, near borehole→nearby neighborhood/around the local area, routed→rode/rode to)。尽量不要重复无关信息,句子不超过五句,并用连接词(for example, so, because)使语意更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child and I often rode it around my neighborhood with friends because it was easy to handle. For example, after school we usually rode to the park to play for an hour.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且用词准确;注意发音和词汇选择(bikes 而不是 banks,shared bikes 而不是 shared bags,commute to work 而不是 reading to work)。使用连词组织句子,提供具体例子并用正确的短语来描述共享单车和通勤情况。句子不超过五句并保持逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, in big cities you can see many shared bikes parked on the streets and commuters using them to get to work.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× I have a small red back and I usually rode it around my near borehole with my friends because it was easy to use and find.

I had a small red bike and I usually rode it around the nearby borehole with my friends because it was easy to use and find.

学生原句有多处问题:1) 用时态不一致。考官问“Did you have...?”,学生应使用过去时;原句开头用“I have”应为“I had”。2) 单词拼写错误“back”应为“bike”。3) 形容词顺序/用法和介词搭配问题:应使用“nearby borehole”或更自然地“around the borehole nearby”。整体建议:保持过去时一致,注意单词拼写,使用合适的形容词/副词位置。

6: Present tense issue

× For example, it often routed to the park after school.

For example, I often rode it to the park after school.

原句中时态和主语不一致:句前文为过去时(rode),此句用“routed”是拼写错误且被动/不合适形式。应为过去时的主动形式“I often rode it”。建议:注意时态一致性并使用正确的动词形式。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Well, I think banks are quietly, uh, are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and they're cheap and convenient.

Well, I think bikes are, uh, quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and they're cheap and convenient.

此句中单词“banks”和“quietly”用错。应为“bikes”(自行车),而“quietly”是副词,语境需形容词“quite”。建议:检查近音词,选择合适词类(形容词/副词)。保持句子清晰,填充停顿词后注意连贯。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× For example, in big cities you can see a lot of shared bags and people reading to work.

For example, in big cities you can see a lot of shared bikes and people riding to work.

原句中“shared bags”显然拼写或词汇错误,应为“shared bikes”(共享自行车);“people reading to work”中“reading”错误,应为“riding”(骑行)并且介词“to”搭配“ride to work”是正确用法。建议:注意近似拼写词(reading/riding),并用正确名词短语表达(shared bikes)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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