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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have. It was a yellow color.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I guess so 'cause many kids are riding it outside the houses.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy, naturalness, and add a brief detail. Use past tense consistently, say the color naturally, and add one specific memory or reason to enrich the answer. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small yellow bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Make the response more confident and formal, use full forms and linking words, and add a specific observation or comparison. Use present simple for general statements and give a short supporting reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so because many children still ride bikes around their neighborhoods, especially in suburban areas where traffic is light.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, I have.

Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple, so the short answer should use the past auxiliary 'did', not the present perfect 'have'. Use 'Yes, I did.' to match past tense. Suggestion: Practice matching short answers to the tense of the question: for 'Did you...' use 'Yes/No, I did/didn't.'

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It was a yellow color.

It was yellow.

Saying 'a yellow color' is redundant and awkward in this context. Use the adjective directly to describe the bike: 'It was yellow.' Suggestion: When describing color, use 'was/wasn't + color' (e.g., 'It was blue.').

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I guess so 'cause many kids are riding it outside the houses.

I guess so, because many kids ride bikes outside their houses.

There are several issues: '’cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Are riding' (present continuous) can be used but simple present 'ride' is more natural for habitual actions. The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bike' in singular while 'many kids' implies plural; use 'bikes'. 'Outside the houses' is better as 'outside their houses' to show possession. Suggestion: Use 'because' for clarity, use simple present for habitual actions ('many kids ride'), ensure pronouns agree in number with their referent ('bikes'), and use possessive pronoun for people ('their houses').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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