Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваша ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки грамматики и стиля, повторения и неестественные фразы. Сделайте предложение с прямым ответом, затем добавьте 1–2 дополнительных предложения с конкретными деталями. Избегайте дублирования (например, "loved" и "adore" одновременно) и исправьте ошибки ("on daily base" → "on a daily basis"). Улучшите связность, используя простые связки: "so", "because", "for example".

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My first bike was black and it quickly became my favourite because I rode it around the neighbourhood every day. For example, I often met my friends at the park and we practised tricks together.

Gợi ý: Ответ общий и содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Начните с прямого мнения (Yes/No/Somewhat) и приведите конкретные причины или примеры. Используйте согласование времен и правильные формы ("bicycles were", "children ride" → "children ride" or "children rode" depending on time). Добавьте связки: "because", "for instance".

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and children often ride to school. For instance, in my town most families own at least one bicycle and you can see kids cycling in the evenings.

× Back then the majority of children had a bike and As for me, I had a bike and that was my favorite.

✓ Back then the majority of children had bikes and, as for me, I had a bike that was my favorite.

The phrase 'majority of children had a bike' is incorrect because 'majority of children' refers to multiple people and requires the plural noun 'bikes'. Capitalisation: 'As' after a comma should be lowercase 'as'. Also remove the redundant 'and' before 'that was my favorite' to improve sentence structure. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match plural subjects and ensure proper punctuation.

× I loved and I adore it very much and rode on daily base.

✓ I loved it and I adored it very much, and I rode it on a daily basis.

The sentence mixes tenses and incorrect forms. 'Adore' should be past tense 'adored' to match 'loved'. 'Rode on daily base' is incorrect: use the verb 'ride' with object 'it' and the phrase 'on a daily basis'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use the correct adverbial phrase 'on a daily basis'.

× As I mentioned before most of children had bicycles and especially in my country bicycles was like the popular sport and children ride on daily basis.

✓ As I mentioned before, most children had bicycles, and especially in my country bicycles were a popular activity and children rode them on a daily basis.

Use 'most children' rather than 'most of children'. 'Bicycles was' is wrong because 'bicycles' is plural and requires 'were'. The phrase 'was like the popular sport' is informal and ungrammatical; 'were a popular activity' is better. 'children ride on daily basis' should be past tense 'rode them on a daily basis' to match context. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and keep tense consistent.