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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course it's my favorite thing to when I have a rest, I always ride my bike with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Not really, because there are many convenient public transport and many people choose to ride the mobile bike in my country.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接且有语法和表达问题。建议直接以主题句回应,控制在2–4句内;注意时态和句子结构(如“Of course, it was my favourite”或“I did”),使用连接词使叙述更流畅,并补充具体细节如骑车的频率、地点或感受。例如改正动词不定式用法和冠词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was my favourite toy when I was young, and I often rode it with my friends after school. We usually cycled around the neighbourhood park, which made me feel free and happy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答思路基本清楚但表达重复且有语法错误。建议先给出直接回应(Yes/No),然后用一两句具体原因支持,用连接词如“because”或“however”,并避免模糊词汇(如“mobile bike”应说明为共享单车)。可补充比较或数据以增强说服力。

Ví dụ: Not really. Public transport is very convenient and many people prefer taking buses or the subway. Also, shared bikes are common for short trips, so traditional private bicycles are less popular than before.

Ngữ pháp

Verb phrase / sentence structure errors

× Of course it's my favorite thing to when I have a rest, I always ride my bike with my friends.

Of course. It was my favorite thing to do when I had a rest; I always rode my bike with my friends.

问题类型对应:26(Sentence structure errors)和6/5(现在/过去时态问题)。原句中结构混乱并且时态不一致:题目问的是“当你是孩子时(past)”,回答应使用过去时。原句把现在时和过去时混用("it's" 与描述儿时的情境矛盾),缺少动词不定式的完整形式("to do" 而不是 "to"),还需要分句标点以提高可读性。建议:在描述过去经历时将动词改为过去式/过去习惯用法(was / used to / rode),保证时态一致;使用完整的不定式(to do);用句号或分号分隔两部分。

Incorrect use of nouns/quantifiers and pluralization, preposition and article issues

× Not really, because there are many convenient public transport and many people choose to ride the mobile bike in my country.

Not really, because there is a lot of convenient public transport and many people choose to ride shared (or dockless) bikes in my country.

问题类型对应:1(Singular and plural issue)、11(Incorrect use of prepositions/word choice)和22(Article errors/word choice)。说明: - "public transport" 在英文中常作不可数名词,需用单数形式搭配 "there is a lot of" 而不是 "there are many"。 - "many convenient public transport" 结构不正确,形容词与不可数名词搭配应为 "a lot of convenient public transport" 或用复数短语如 "many convenient public transport options"。 - "mobile bike" 不是常用表达;若指共享单车应使用 "shared bikes" 或 "dockless bikes"。 - 另外,"choose to ride the mobile bike" 中的定冠词 "the" 不合适,应为复数或不加冠词。建议:使用不可数表达时用 "there is" + "a lot of",或者改为可数短语如 "many public transport options";使用常见词汇描述共享单车。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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